 waterbendergrl 2007-04-07 . chapter 2This is so good! Please... continue! |
 Tigerprime 2006-05-31 . chapter 2I'm also enjoying this story
Wonder why the strange guy wants Lilo?
Could her transformation into an experiment have somwething to do with it?
Can't wait for more |
 Da bigg guy 2006-05-25 . chapter 2hm . . . . . . I don't know what to say but i don't want to be rude emm . . . . keep writing and Ill give you a propper review |
 largefish8 2006-05-25 . chapter 2Nice update. Keep up the good work. |
 waterbendergrl 2006-05-23 . chapter 1this is cute and funny! Oh lilo is a girl stitch! |
 Kioko the pirate 2006-05-07 . chapter 1Well, this sounds like it could be a good story. But... there are a lot of grammer mistakes, and when you say Angle, I think you mean Angel. Anyway, besides those mistakes this could be a good story. |
 largefish8 2006-05-07 . chapter 1Another good story.
Great introduction. I'll be watching these stories with interest. I wish you the best of luck writing these stories. |