I can't belive Myrtle and her posse stooped so low! I mean, they make the series funny occasonally, but nearly killing Lilo?!?! I shall hunt them down and beat them with a rusty chainsaw!

This is a very great story and can't wait too read more when written!

So... many... mistakes. Try using the 'd' a bit more often, wouldja?

I'm really enjoying this story

You can tell that Jumba has a caring heart, even if he's an evil genious

Wonder how Lilo is going to copoe with her change?

I can understand Nani's worry; what will happen to Lilo now that she has the genetic modifications? and what about proving she can still turn experiments good? this is going to get hairy; awesome story!

Poor Lilo! I hope she feels better. Update soon!

that chapter certainly answered how lilo became a hybrid. there where possibly one or two things that i thought jumba said differently, but then again this is your story so you write him the way you think he sounds like.

as usual update soon

Urge to exterminate Myrtle rising.

Keep up the story. This promises to be good.

I really like to let Myrtle die in my fic now.
But I made her good. Good Chapter.

you really have something here. the idea of only lilo turning partly experiment is a cool one, the image i get is something simmilar to the terminator movies.

anyway i would like to know what actually happened to lilo, that caused her to become this half human half experiment person. i could imagen the reaction that nani will have could be entertaining.

Okay first off the story has possibility, but your story is all over the map. First off what did Myrtle and her *clones* do to Lilo? 2nd you mentioned Jumba saved her but how? You have a good idea here...but you need to explain things better.

Imagi

This was good, even though it was short. If there's going to be a second chapter, update soon!

This looks like it'll be a good story.

Only bit I think is missing is a flashback of what Myrtle actually did.