Pretty good, though you could be more descriptive.

A rather intresting outlook on Ginyu's powers ... very intresting indead. I just love evil twists like that.

That was beautiful. though I don't really see the ginyu force, especially captain ginyu, as evil. But nice point of view.

also known as 'guardiansaiyan'.

Nice one, but you could make it longer than just a one-shot, you know.

Ahh...I certainly didn't expect that. Darn, I got all excited, thinking that Jeice had gone totally evil.

Nonetheless, this was an interesting short story. T'would be nice to see more stuff like this around. Good job ^_^.
-Da General

this is pretty good i'll admit *sees what happened* JEICE DIED! NO!! bunny's dance of words? was jeice austrailian? (sp?)

Captain Ginyu, you devious old tosser! Excellent one-shot and a suprising ending - although I really shouldn't have put it past Ginyu to pull a stunt like that. I actually feel something akin to pity for Jeice. And of course I would love to see more!

I'm so happy to see you back writing GF fanfiction. I really hope you don't mind, but I hosted your two stories -"Reading Bedtime Stories" and
"Four Fugitives, a Toucan ..."- on the Ginyu Force shrine, 'Strike a Pose!'. I made sure all credit went to you and sent you a wee email a while back to let you know (You were also voted fav author - thought that might be a nice ego-boost haha!).

Funnily enough, I re-read Reading Bedtime Stories just last week. Can I beg you for spoilers? XD

Didn't see that one coming! It's a nice one-shot, but it could work as a longer story as well.

well now that Ginyu has stolen Jeice's body, the whole timeline has changed. if u kept writing, everything would be different, alternate futures, etc... it was a nicely written fic. so, Jeice is that one with the pink skin and white hair, right? im not too familiar with older eps of DBZ, but i kno who Ginyu is. nice fic. :)

Woah. That rocks. I would have never thought that Ginyu could be that smart. lol. I love it!