KAWAII!
Miaka is damn stupid. Her act was so fake. But that's why I like her.XD

I thought this was adorable. Yes, it's true, Tasuki was very big brotherly to Chiriko. I thought that was a nice plot development in FY since all of the other characters hardly interacted beyond their "main" buddy. I mean, they are supposed to be "brother seishi," so doesn't that mean that they feel some kind of brotherly bond regardless of how long they knew each other?

...But anyways, nice oneshot. I liked the ending. :D That's a very believable reaction on the part of Miaka. Too funny.

ha! that was so cute, really.

-happy sigh- This is, like, my favorite Tasuki fic. Of all time. It's so cute! It's enough to make someone melt. -melts- Keep up the good work!
-Tayk-

Ohmygosh! /Why/ on earth haven't I read this yet? But anyway. =D

Aw, that was so cute! I both liked how you made Tasuki show his more sensitive side, and how you portray Miaka. It might just be me, but most of the time I find that Miaka is really, really annoying. But not this time!

Aw. I'm not over how cute this is. But it was a good idea! I'm glad you got the inspiration to write this story! It was totally worth it.

THIS STORY WAS BRILLIANT!

I loved this- despite his bad boy ways, I can definitely see Tasuki acting as a parent/big brother to Chiriko. Miaka catching him letting down his guard (and Tasuki's reaction to it) made the scene that much more sweet and in character.

Great job!!

Every good wish,
KittyLynne