omg i just realised something: this story is the one that began my turning into a yaoi fan ^^ it was my first slash fan fic back in 2006 ^^ i was so happy to find it again *faves*

This story is really beautifully written. You made the pairing very sweet. ^^

hey why aren't you writing I like this story a lot and I want to see what happens next.SOON!

I don't really know why, but I laughed when Shadow said to Sonic "youre beautiful"
GOOD JOB ANYWAY!

yay! i love Sonadow! be it yaoi or they find out they're brothers, I DON'T CARE!! poor Sonic...he can never run again... good thing Shadow's there for him. you should write a sequel to this! better yet, you should make a series!

I loved it! it was very well written! I'm just starting to get into sonic/shadow, though I'm still a sonamy fan...yeah keljafj.

I loved the end of this! ^__^! I wish you'd write more though.
Also, I dunno why it's rated M, but w/e XD!

oh you so have to do more...

Yay this was the best i've ever read! plz make more PLZ!

A Friend

hey don't tell me you gave up on this it was getting good come on don't give up so quickly make more so I can read it please.

This is genuis! LOVE IT!

OMG i loved it! it was sad ;_;

Shadow held it, just staring at Sonic for the moment. He mumbled. "If those doctors hurt you in any way, you better tell me. No one but I have that privlige of making your life miserable."

This part was a little funny thou. Great job!

...I don't even know where to start... If i said this storie isn't the best i've read so far, It would be a complete lie! This.. Unlike any other storie i've read.. Really came through to me... I haven't had this feeling before, I felt bad really bad for Sonic this time.. Normally, while i read..I don't have this felling, Thinking it's just fiction. But this time, i forgot all that, and actually became very involved in the things going on! I pray to the big man that you are going contiue this storie.

If not.. I'm asking you to allow me to do it myself, Just for my own entertainment. I would never distribute something i didn't create myself.. Thats stealing..

Anyway the point is! This is straight in on my top tree list of greatest ever fan-fictions i've read in my life.
So i hope of all my heart that this will have a sequel...

So my request is: Please continue this storie, Possibly THE best thing i've ever had the honor to lay my eyes on.. Great work!.



I apollogize of this rewiew is badly put up, It's my first one ever.. So i'm not that experienced yet.

watch the rating

cool!

I love this chapter.It is really good.Hope you write more.Well got to go ok bye.

Mizu ^_^