These are interesting... The chronological order and the drabbles seems a really fitting format for Nemuro, somehow. I like "choice" and "dependence" best, and the first sentence of "reason"--"unnaturally" is such a perfect way to start. "Revolution" is sad and fitting, although the paragraph which I am assuming can only be about Utena and Anthy is a little confusing, particularly the sentence, "She'd told them that the man was..." She being Anthy? Told who? I'll go back and reread it and it will probably fall into place, but right now I'm not sure.

Well-written pieces. I always like to read about Mikage, and these fit.