To make this story less appalling to mine eyes it would be lest if you just deleted it...JOKING!
Never have I left such a crappy review and I don't plan on starting with you!
I actually like this story and definately hope you continue on as planned. I can't really say that I have suggestions but then I have other things on the brain right now other than fanfiction ideas. When they do come up however I'll be sure to send you a ring...or private message as the case may be...
-Toni

YAY! No one can fool jack! Jack is the bestest pirate ever! loved it update soon.

:) Lots of smileys for you! Update please--I love the "wealthy donations" part, btw...