Reviews for Mr and Mrs Vaughn

Reviews For: Mr and Mrs Vaughn

jenmarie 2006-05-27 ch 1,	abuseI love the whole story! I read it a couple days ago, but the computer I was at wouldn't let me submit a review. It's a great plot. Really cute! Great work :)
Em-958 2006-05-14 ch 8,	abuseOh My God! I love this ending more actually! It's way better! I love the cliffhanger! Please continue! I would absolutely read the sequel if you're writing one! I'm not at all! Sure the other ending was better, but this gives more to the story and a sequel. Vaughn and Syd isn't back together, but still that doesn't make me because somehow I know that they will be again. lol But doubling someone? Doesn't that like, hurt? Remember Anna Espinosa, didn't she scream? And now that Isabelle have seen her double, they can give her back to her parents? I mean, she would tell them and they would ruin their plans. This is really exiting! Pretty please write a sequel! You have written a great story and you are an great author! Keep the good work up and don't stop writing! //Emma
Em-958 2006-05-12 ch 7,	abuseAww.. that was beautiful! I knew she would come back and that Sydney adn Vaughn would find eachother! But Isabelle showing up like that? Was this a part of Irinas big plan? Smart plan spy-grannie! This is a great story and I love the cheesy ending. Though I think you got into a hurry to finish up, didnät you? Doesn't matter, it was all GOOD. You should keep writing, you are a great author and you reallö kno how to write a good Alias fanfiction wich is lovly. I hope you write something fresh and new soon, I promise you I will read it! Take care! //Emma
Em-958 2006-05-12 ch 6,	abuseSOB OMg, aren't you mean?! I really thought she went back thre and that Isabelle was back! That was so mean and so good! Gee, you got me crying! Argh! Great, emotinal chapter. I really do hope she doesn't write her name on that paper. It's not Sydney. Pretty please I hope you update soon, really soon. I love you're story, great written! You're an great author! Keep this up and your fanfic will be one of my top 10 Alias favourites! See you at the end of chapter 7! //Emma
Em-958 2006-05-12 ch 5,	abuseOh My God. THis is some crazy fast hapeing ** and I like it! It's different, and itäs devestating. I have to read the next chapter! Please let them get back together! Please don't make Isabelle really dead! Great written, you really are getting into the charecters and their thoughts. Just wonderful. Youre' an great author! Keep it up! //Emma
Em-958 2006-05-12 ch 4,	abuseOh my God! That's horrible! Oh My God! I canät believe you actually dared to do that ! That can't be true! The picture have to be a fake! I have got to read the next chapter! This is horrbile/amazing at the same time! Keep it up! I love the touch of the epsiode feeling! //Emma
Em-958 2006-05-12 ch 3,	abuseOH! That's bad! :/ This is really good. Keep it up! I have got to read the next chapter now! Sorry I can't write a longer review, I have got to read the next chapter now!! Good work! Great! VeryExiting, keep it up! //Emma
vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2006-05-12 ch 5,	abuseThey can't get divorced! I hope they work everything out. And I hope they find Isabelle and take her to Disney. Thanks for updating this so fast, and I can't wait for more.
elowe4 2006-05-11 ch 4,	abuseholy crap! you killed their daughter! update soon!
vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2006-05-11 ch 4,	abuseOMG!! You left it there. I can't believe it. I really hope everything's okay. I trust you on this one, but please don't keep me in suspense too long. This is a great fic so far and I love the storyline! I love when Sydney and Vaughn fight because it usually means there is a nice making up portion. I know they really didn't fight that chapter at all, but they really didn't talk either! I can't wait for more! Please continue!!
Em-958 2006-05-08 ch 2,	abuseDUUN DUUN DUN DUN! Mean bad ** cliffhanger! Loved this chapter, even better then the first one which is great! SO now THEY ARE actually trying to fix this ... AND THEN someone has to come and destroy it with kidnapping Isabelle!? OOH, that's bad! About the ALIAS thing, at first I thoguht there was something wrong. I mean, what's up with that, writing letters instead of drawing a line? Then I realiced that you spelled Alias wich I thought was very cool and funny of you to do! I like this chapter, and I like the brutal "a knife into Carries skull" thing. It's just.. BRUTAL. That means that the kidnappers ARE serious. Which freaks me up but mostly makes me exited and want to read THE NEXT chapter! Carrie isn't Marshall's Carrie? Right? No? Pretty Please not!? Anyway, love the chapter, hope you write the next chapters very soon! You are a good writer and you are starting to get into the characters pretty well! Good for you! Good for me! Please update soon! You are great and you have made a great start for this story! Keep it up! I will review the next chapter, I promise! //Emma
vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2006-05-07 ch 2,	abuseOMG! This story is awesome so far. It almost seems like Mr. and Mrs. Smith in a way, but with Isabelle. Which it probably is kind of like it, based on the title. Great start. I love the tension between Syd and Vaughn, and I also love the fluff. When they were on the mission together, they were so cute. Can't wait for more!! Please update soon!
Em-958 2006-05-07 ch 1,	abuseGreat start for a story! It's well written and I like you're writing style. There are two writing styles in major, either you're a "it" writer or "not" a writer. Some people have it, some just don't. Sure it's something in the middle that I don't know what to call, I think I'm one of them, But you, you're defiently an "it" writer ;) (If it doesn't make any sence to you, that was an compliment lol) I love Sydney and Vaughn's relationship and I feel that they should not be with anybody else. They are made to be. I very often come across fan fictions with Sydney and Vaughn living happily ever after. Most of them sucks because they never fight or have any problems. Yours is different. You take up actual issues and problems in their relationship and that's good. Í hate it but still like it. I hate it because they fight, or "ignore" the fact that they need to fix the problem together. At first both Vaughn and Sydney felt a little out of character. I feel you found Vaughn's character a little there but I don't recognize Sydney so much. I'm also having trouble with thinking that Vaughn and Sydney wouldn't take up their issues with each other, or at least confront each other. Remember past times in the show, whenever there was a fight or a problem between them, they didn't last long until they had to take it up with each other and confront each other. But other than that, this story is really interesting. It got me thinking. When Syd and Vaughn work for the CIA and are on dangerous missions, maybe their personal lifes works just because they live in danger and they need someone to hold on to? You never know. I don't want it to be that way, but it's possible. But a question, they still love each other, right? Vaughn mentioned it but not Sydney. It scares me. It's so typical that the suroundings sence their problems with each other. I wonder fi you will ever break anyone of them? Seriously, you have to. I wonder who will break first. Please make them fix this! I just hope you continue the story, I'm really interested and will definitely follow it from now on :) Also, you're kidnapping Isabelle, that should be scary! Keep it up and keep on writing! This is a grate start and you absolutely should continue! I'll make you a deal, if you continue, I will read/review every chapter! See you at the end of chapter 2! //Emma

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