Me: This is freakin' hilarious! Who knew Hanatarou was such a perv. I know what's on those CDs you sicko!
Hanatarou: I'm sorry Liz-chan! Maybe giving ** music was too much!
Me: I was lying! O.O *hits him over the head with a giant fan* You closet pervert! TT-TT And I thought you were the nice guy too!

wait!! hahahahaha! **! i love this! i love Shakespeare! good job! his name is safe in your hands!

Glad I thought to check your other stories! I've gotten really into Bleach recently, and this was hilarious. Where do you get all your inspiration? I sure need some! No wait-- I have plenty of plot bunnies ready, what I really need is motivation. Damn.

Hm, a note to leave off on...
*sings*
Brush up your Shakespeare!
Start quoting him now!
Brush up your Shakespeare
And the women you will wow!
(I'd continue, but I don't really know the words... ^^;)

XD Hn. LOL. How interesting. Crackish, silly, and you've got all these pairings that I like LOL. Keep going!

XD LOL. I just had to review this little song here XD. Too amusing. Now I'm gonna continue reading...

wow... a long awaited update had finally arrived... that was a hilarious wedding... poor Ichigo...

Oh my god... Lee and Gai made their appearance here! OMG ^^

Haha, good one, write more!

haha WHOO!! lurve this story!! UPdate ASAP PLS!! XD!!

..i haven't reviewed this chapter? but i could have sworn that i did...oh well. anyway, loved how poor tatsuki had to go through both hitsugaya and ishida, and renji's strange techniques. oh, and really liked how tatsuki got lina's nickname. update soon!

Very well done. The sentences are more coherent. I enjoyed the chapter. Keep it up and keep on improving. :] I look forward to the next.

loved it... very imaginative... I'm glad... I actually continued reading your fic... it's hilarious...loved it... also included all my favorite pairing... although it does not revolve around ichiruki still loved it... tsuki and renji kissing on a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G

haven't read this chap but i'll read it when i get back home... it's interesting I'll give you that... so i'll read on then... toodles...

dear lord...poor ukitake. and renji is really acting like an idiot...update soon! (and i liked how u tossed in lina's title for tatsuki!)

Okie... first off, good effort. From my understanding Scales the dragon is unable to help you edit. Give yourself a pat on the back for trying hard to give an explict account of the events.

But you need to re-read and edit your work before you put them up. The reason for my slow updates is partly because I write one day, edit it the next day, seat on it a few days to forget, then re-read and edit it, and finally before posting, re-read and edit it some more.

You mustn't be afraid to delete whole paragraphs should you find that the chapter doesn't flow. I understand that it takes a lot of time and effort to write one but remember, the first draft is nothing but a draft, to be re-shaped, re-tuned and improved on. Perhaps even to be re-written.

Only through this, will you be able to learn and improve as you go. Forget all the effort it takes to write. Remember that in the end, your audience must be able to understand what you are trying to drive across.

I will look forward to your next chapter with great anticipation.

:] Ayako [:

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