Oh my...Ryoma must have been badly scared and scarred for his life...(LOL)

OMG, I felt sorry for Ryoma-san having to go thru all that.. Heh heh.. Nice fic..

Ryoma is such a poor thing, wonder how his gg 2 b able 2 try n recruit Okita again.

hahahahaha so funny!

Bwuhahahahah!

This is superb! Loved the constant innuendos, lol! ^_^

oh my gosh, this was amazing! poor Ryoma and hurray for Kichisaburo! I know I should be writing and not drawing, but would you like to see some fan art for this story?

Oh and I have to point out, one of the things in the story that made me laugh was (probably) just a typo... the star spangled "bangle" instead of "banner"... "bangle" is a much more fun word though!

anyway there could definitely be a few more chapters to this story. Iron boy and Dragon boy... Kichi trying to remember if anybody he works with uses stupid names like those... ha! that's brilliant. it was all brilliant! write more smile stories, please!

Very funny! What a misunderstanding. ^_^

I love these Smile series, worth the 5 mins to read them as they come.

Ah, poor Ryouma! He probably thought Okita is launching a new kind of attack on him. *Laughs*

There is a mistake somewhere: 'pointing a trembling captain at the surprised captain.'

that was so funny!! poor Ryoma!1 haha i was highly amused!

Buhahahaha! This was so funny and original! \

Cleverly written. Looks like Ryoma will definitely stay away a while.

And I agree with Umeko. There needs to be a second part to Smile: The Confusion. ^^

Love it! So original, and so hilarious XD

The starting with the exchange betwen Sano and Shinpachi was cute. Colossal mistaken identity issues here. My guess is Sakamoto wouldn't come near Okita or Kichi for a good while. Poor guy. Though I am surprised with two lookalikes in Kyoto, there aren't more unfortunate misunderstandings. (ie. some of Kichi's customers trying to pick up off-duty Okita and ending up getting thrashed)

Talk about a misunderstanding! Poor traumatised Ryouma. ^_^ Very humorous.