Whee! Little Chichiri! Kawaii! _ (mucho exclamation points @_@) Can't wait to read the rest.

hola! well, i found this fic on a website, and ended up finding it here about an hour after i started it. as you can probably tell, i finished it. i took me a few hours, but i loved it! it was so wonderful! there were so many sad and angsty parts to it, and i loved how wondefully displayed everyone was. i loved it. it was so wonderful, and a change from other fics. the topic was interesting, and origanal. i think i've only seen one story where koran dies, but it had a different plot to it. the depth to the story was beautiful. you made the entire story so beautifully, and i couldn't possibly stop reading. all in all, this is a wonderful fan fic, and i hope you do more fy fan fics, as this was just simply gorgeous. so put it this way, there are no words on how wonderful this was.

frenchie

TASU... i mean, YOSHITAKA! YAY!... oh wait, this means the story's over... but... but... awwwwwww. dang it, I liked it alot! but now its over *sniff*

This was really great, it is the best story I've read on this site, even better than some of the books I've read. You're a really great writer anne. I hope you become an author in the future, and I'll read all of your Katie-friendly books.

AAAAAAAHHHHH! TASUKI DIED! *sniff* I know it was inevitable but... but...*sniff* I was hoping he wouldn't die in the story. bah. dang it... now i have to read the epilogue... at least Tasuki will be in it,... he is in it right?

You know, after reading 31 chapters and an epilogue, I still feel the same about this story as I did when it started-it's fantastic. This *is* one of the best Chichiri fics I've read, and as a bonus, inclueds Kouran and Hikou. I guess, since I don't want to bore you with a long, huge, typical Otaku Pitcher review, that all I really want to say is thanks. Thanks for a great story, and one of the best plots I've read in some time. Thanks Annie-chan, until you write again.

daaaaaaaaaaa...sleepy second period for me tomorrow no daaa...*just read this whole story in one sitting. the time is now 3:02AM* *thumbs up* I almost cried at the end, chapter 31. This was great D Now I'm going to go to bed.*falls over* zzzzzzz

Nuriko: *snoring in the corner*

I love it I love it I love it! You're so wonderful! One of the greatest fics I've ever read!

very good ficcy no da! though sad at times but all an all a big favorite. daaa! u guys NEED to see the new OAV it's great! Tasuki's even more good looking than before (he gotta ponytail _)and he and Chichiri are stronger too! Tasuki's really forgetful no da! the new girl is worse then Yui could ever hope to be. o.o i better shut up now before i ruin it. _

*sniffle, sob* This is so good! I love your story! *is almost as sad that Houjun died as she is at the thought of this fanfic being over* You've really done a wonderful job with this story. You've also accomplished something that has always been hard for me: sticking with the same story for more than a chapter or two. This is really great. I admire your dedication and writing skills! You've done a spectacular "what-if" story. I've loved every second of it! Congratulations on what is likely the best fanfic I've seen in a very long time!

Beautiful. I can't imagine it done in any better way. Although it was difficult for you to write, I still enjoyed reading it immensely. It's hard for me to believe that only the epilogue is left-in other words, are you planning on writing any other stories after this one is *really* finished? I really hope so. It's just so hard to find a good Chichiri/Kouran story, and I've really been pleased with this one.

Yay! A happy ending! i don't have to look for a funny story now, though i prolly will neways... I liked it! The poor baby's family. awww, oh well, no sad stuff makes for a boring chapter, huh? write next chapter fast, and hopefully with Tasuki in it :D

wow! I love this story! *sniff* kinda sad that you're wrapping it up soon... How old is Houjun now? Fourty-ish?

Happy, happy Otaku Pitcher. Although this chapter was short, I enjoyed it very much. I can hardly believe it's almost time for this story to end. I don't want it to end so soon! It was nice of you to leave poor Chichiri's family alone for once. Really though, this chapter was nice. I wish more people would actually update their stories, rather than never finish them. In fact, seeing this story update has made my day. Thanks.

it took me four days, off and on, to finish this fanfic. And all I can say is... WOW! This is great! it's so interesting to see what might have happened if a few things had turned out differently. Hojun has so much stress... and you portray it so well! I love this fic! I really hope you continue! I can't wait for more!

I thought that, although this wasn't one of your longer chapters (of which I'm quite fond of), this was still an excellent chapter. I'm glad you didn't kill off two kids in two chapters. By the way, happy graduation! I know this is about a week late, but it's the thought that counts. Anyway, I'll excuse the lenght of this chapter due to graduation exitement, and festivities, and preparations. Well, I'm going to make this a short review (seeing as how I've got MANY stories to R&R today) and wish you good luck on your interview! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out! It's just so nice to see one of my favourite stories update. I just *knew* today was going to be a good day!