Yea... Ok Cloud it's not so bad having a step-sis wid soft hair... Lmfao! Like it great story. Update soon!

Good chapter! Can't wait for the next update.

I like it he heh ^^ can't wait to see him falling to aerith ^^ update ne

Oh wow what an awesome present! Thanks alot! And I didnt think it was messy at all! Now I have to wait 2 weeks for the next instalment! :(...but on the bright side the chemistry between them is heating up :)

*bounces around with anxiety* OMG she fell!! Catch her Cloud!

This is a really great story =D. I simply cannot wait to read more. Watch out for certian grammar errors and word usage though. But seriously, update soon!

Ah! I saw this challenge on Beeria's page and I thought it was a pretty interesting idea. I had kinda wanted to take the challenge, but you did a WAY better job then I ever could have.

I love it, love it, love it!

Please do update!
~Oddishness

WOW great fic! I heart it XD ♥

cant wai to see next chappie xD

AAH!It's a cliffhanger! LITERALLY! great updates!I loved it!

OMG! Cloud has to rescue her! I like the longer chapters personally(even if I tend to write short ones)
But at least they got closer in this one. Update soon

Yay! An update! ^^ Aw, poor Cloud and Aeris. -sigh- This story is getting interesting, please update soon!

Oh no! They have to keep seeing each other! Update soon! the suspense of what they are going to do is killing me!

Haha, is it possible to love cliffies and hate them at the same time? Either way, it was really good. Update fast please! Poor Aerith...having Cloud as a step brother would SUCK...unless you're up for a whole lot o' taboo! (Which *I* would be)

Wow, this is really good so far. I'm waiting for the next chapter.

THis is great! you've really started it off well, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon so I can read some more cloriths :D