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| Taura Callisto 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is actually my second read of this story, and I realized I didn't review it the last time, so I thought I would do so now. It was good, I enjoy the brotherly concern Don seems to be feeling toward Charlie. =) |
| bagira 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad you were convinced to post it here - I never would have seen it otherwise, and that would have been a crying shame. It's absolutely gorgeous :D I love Don in this one! Of course, I love Charlie too 'cause he's Charlie and it's impossible for me not to, but Don was simply wonderful! I loved his protectiveness of Charlie and his gesture of care in not returning Terry's look because he doesn't want to alienate his brother any more than he already is, doesn't want to separate him any more and maybe not get him back someday. Your picture of the relationship between them, too - Don's ability to make him laugh, thereby erasing any worry he has that Charlie is gone forever, somewhere Don can't reach him... he wants to include him now and is ashamed that he didn't always before, and that's so heartbreakingly sweet! All your characterization is spot on, it's original and thought-provoking, and it's very poetic and lovely to read. I loved it! And don't worry about someone else having read it before; I'm willing to bet no one will mind reading it more than once :D I know I won't. |
| Maximum Poofy 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI just adore one-shots like this. The imagery was fantastic and the emotions very clear. It had all the essense of Numb3rs and I love it! |
| SaJi 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Simply beautiful. Thank you very much for posting this story here. *heart* |
| Latanya Kassidy 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. I'm a big fan of the brothers Eppes interaction. I loved your detailed insight into Don's mind and his thoughts on his brother. Great job! ~L.K. |
| Izhilzha 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseI know I've read this before, and it took my breath away just as much this time around. *He can still make Charlie laugh. He can still make Charlie see him. As long as he can do that, maybe there isn’t any place Charlie can go where Don can’t bring him back.* I wonder if Don's control issues come from this, from Charlie always being somewhere past him, beyond him, outside the world they're supposed to share as brothers. Regardless, this is a beautiful, character-accurate fic, and I thank you for it. |
| jlm110108 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseHey, I don't care if the string trick is possible as you've written it. I never understand half of the math stuff in the show anyway, so I might as well suspend disbelief a while longer. That said, this is a beautiful story. Your use of the language, your insight into the characters, are just wonderful! Joanne |
| thebondgirl 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abusewow - i mean... wow... there are few fics that i can say really leave me speechless...this would be one of those few - just, the depth to which it reaches on personal, emotional levels for the characters is truly incredible - you're a terrific writer and i look forward to reading any fics you write in the future!:):) |
| JennK528 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, very nice! Loved the last paragraph. (And I hated The DaVinci Code, too! lol!) |
| BeckyS 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, another one of my very favorite stories -- I'm so glad you posted it here because I kept losing it on LJ. Now I can add it to my favorites and find it whenever I want. Thanks so much! Becky |