The ending was utterly brilliant. I congratulate you on a job well done! Some of this fic being a bit.. questionable, and stricken of cliche- but otherwise you did a good job. Though I ask, "Why the hell isn't this in the romance genre?" Which is, indeed, a good question.

Regardless, this fic is dedication and love, and I'm dying to dig into the ssequal...

I think I'll go do that right now.

Kudos!

SugarCubeChibi

Woo! I loved it! Awesome story! :D

You might want to review your grammar. When a person is speaking you seem to always have the first word after the quotation marks capitalized. For example..."Get back here," He whined. That is very jarring to read and is technically putting random capital letters right smack in the middle of a sentence. Unless the first word after the quotation marks is a person's name it comes off as a visual equivalent of stuttering.

"Get back here," he whined.

Many people will argue that either form is correct and some even try to say it is their "style" of writing, but the second example reads more smoothly. Conversely, you also regularly fail to capitalize people's names. I hope you find this helpful. It is not gushing, sugary fangirling praise, but neither is it a flame. There are some serious technical flaws in the fic that if corrected will make it read much better.

A beta reader with a strong foundation in grammar, spelling and punctuation can be very helpful.

OMGEE! LOVEIT LOVEIT LOVEIT! XD I totally heard about this from spopococ. I had ta read it. And it is AWESOME! 10 stars, woot!

{:Kallin:}

o.o Okay. That was an amazing story. Probably one of the best that I've read. I love your writing style immensely. Easy to read, but not dumbed down. The plot was...xD I admire you for it. Also! ZackxSephirothxCloud? I LIKE. 8D ...You may have turned me to that pairing! ANYWAYS. I can't wait for Remix!

Oiyo! -waves at scarlett- "Training" reader here. now you two've got me thinking about attempting the same experiment. o.o

Kallyn

I was reading ‘Training’ by spopococ and she reccomended(forgive the spelling, I haven't been to bed yet and it is about 7:30am and I can't remember how to spell that right now.) you and your story 'Mix'. I loved it, except for the part where Cloud had to get kicked out of SOLDIER because of that stupid prick Tyler... gr...

Fantastic story, I'm going to bed now.

Kudos!

BL

Oh GOD Darling, what a PERFECT ending. :o

Seriously, it was sad, it was sweet, it was so suggestively angsty. Wow.

Sorry took so long to review, bushfires are taking its toll on the mental health of most Victorians. :(

AND ROFLMFAO.

Spopoc? xD xD

You're freaking adorable. ILY! XD

I really like this though I'm surprised by the pairings with the three. So you write drabbles? Maybe I'll request something if I get to read a new chapter later on.

Okay! It's finally time to start ribbing you for taking so bloody long to get this out. lol Now let's hear more about Cloud's background. I'm dying to find out why he's so afraid to share it with his pals.

Good Chapter, a bit too short but none-the-less good. Was hoping that the 3 of them would have gone farther in their adventures but Cloud at least has admitted that he's gay. But I do hope that whatever is bothering him about his past he can come to terms with or some how maybe Seph will be the one to actually help Cloud out bc they seem to have the same kind of personality.

Thanku for updating, and that ur finally done school.

Happy Hollidays every one and have a very happy new year.

Buaha. xD

This chapter made me lol, and ILY forever for it. xD

I want more though. D:

And gawd, what have you done? You just HAD to put that I update quickly. I'll be getting death threats. lol.

OMG, OMG, OMG!

What's Cloudy up to eh? You've made him a sneakeh bitch. :3

What can I bribe you with to get this updated soon huh? ;D

Omg, this new chapter is like a birthday present. xD TY! lol.

ILY NOOBFACE.

Have my babies. xD

(Let's see how freaked out YOUR readers get, eh? :3)

i like it alot

i think you should have something with zack taking cloud and sephiroth to the place he took cloud and reno and it becoming really strange thanks to zack randomly blurting things as he watches cloud and sephiroth eat.

post more soon

Cheers!

Aw...man...and I was getting ready for an awsome chapter of a 3sum *crys* ok...so the next question is when the frick r u gonna put the next chapter up of all 3 of them makin' out and other sexual activities...lol Pritty Please update:)*kisses puter* I figure Zack and Seph should just dip Cloud in some chocolate and have a Cloudy Cake...lol

Well I hope the next chapter comes up soon...thanks for posting the story:)

Definatly getting hot! Well at least Cloud is now aware of his sexuality and Seph is in the pic...