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| GinnyStar 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseVery good. Well written. The fire lizard of this pass are a differnt from the ones from the first impressed ones. :) |
| Sveamaia 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseHey there! I really love the storys around Menolly and I like yours too. Thank you very much! Svea |
| Lady of the Serpentine 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseIn Dragonsdawn, the fire lizards Impress their hatchlings, but after that it's not mentioned again for some reason. The instinct to do so might have faded as more and more were Impressed by humans. |
| clara200 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abusecute |
| XLadyBountyX 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseInteresting plot bunny! It's been a while since I've read Dragonsong, but this seems pretty lvl with what took place and very cool to see through another's eyes. Good job! |
| j-mercuryuk 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, it's a sweet story from an interesting PoV. An interesting idea. Well done and well wrtien. |
| hyperthermophile 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked this! It was a nice change of pace, seeing something from a P.O.V thats not human... If you like HArper Hall Trilogy stories, read my new one! It's called Points Of Authority! Lolz, you don't have to. It just that I've noticed a sad lack of Harper Hall stories and am spreading the word! But seriously, good job on this. It followed the story closely, but not so closely that it was boring/repetitive. |
| Sellena Silvia88 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really cool! I'm a BIG fan of Anne McCaffrey's dragons, and your story really captured what I thought fire lizards thoughts were like. Googd job! I really enjoyed reading this, especially sonce no-one really writes any good Pern stuff... very sad... let me know if you've heard of any other good authors, or if you write anything else! Keep going and good luck! Sellena_Silvia88 |
| LokiGirl 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely told. I enjoyed reading it very much. |
| Tattooed Goddess 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, it seemed exactly what a Queen Firelizard would think, you should do one in Merga, or Beauty's point of view about the Hatching of Kimi and Zair, or one in Berd's point of view of the Hatching, when Brekke tried to re-impress a queen. Ta, Faith |
| kos9 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. I like little oneshots that move well and in the short amount of time show great characterization, even for a fire lizard queen! Looking forward to reading more of your Pern material! |
| person 2006-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool story! Is this all of the story? If it is ... write a sequal! |
| Shlane 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a sweet little story and very well written too |
| Maiyri 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseNice little Story, I think it was definetly a good idea. I like the way the queen thinks of Menolly, and the bit about the Eater. My one crit is that the queen didn't seem to have the bossiness that's mentioned in Dragonsong, but i think other than that it's very good. |
| zowiemagic 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseVERY nice story - I think you did a wonderful job of capturing the personality of the queen. Keep up the good work! :) |