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ravenhart139
2009-09-08 . chapter 1
this was a verry good storry i loved it
alix33
2009-08-28 . chapter 1
"In a week, he’d been moving in with Luna and her spacious apartment in Lower London," - Luna has a spacious apartment? This muggle reviewer (who has but a minuscule studio apartment) is now SO jealous of Luna!
"and grabbed her coat from where she’d tossed it on the chair a few days earlier." - Winter, summer, what colour and style coat, please?
"And he kissed her. This time, her hand wasn’t in way." - 'And he kissed her. This time, her hand wasn’t in THE way.'
XOXO-RaNdoM-pIxIE-OXOX
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
if only getting rid of stupid colds was that easy!
Raven3182
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Nice story, I throughly enjoyed it, especially Luna's spoons. Thanks for writing!
cute18386
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
nice one, i only can't understand about the spoon part. somewhat confusing to me but still nice~
R. Lucas Spitfire
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
No. We don't want chemqueen to be happy.

Humorous one-shot; I like it. Devious Weasley twins trying to get Harry and Hermione together always makes for happy readings.
Bowles
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
Cute story, and Ron and Luna were priceless in it. I think I may have liked the epilogue the most out of anything; good mix of humor and romance.
Fabulous and Feminist
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
But I do want to make you happy!
Hm...I think the reverse psychology just friend my brain.

It's great! Enough humour, enough weirdness (silent Shakespeare?) and lots of fluff!
It's really well written too-which sometimes helps with these things...
methegirl
2009-02-08 . chapter 1
I don't know when you posted this, but reverse psychology totally works. I love the story, its cute. Keep writing!
The Earth's Memento
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
I was a nice attempt. Your story is one of the few HHr stories that I enjoyed reading. I'm a DHr fan, but a little HHr doesn't hurt right? Thanks! *mwah*
Ahyanah
2008-02-04 . chapter 1
On your use of reverse psychology-Your psych teacher will be very happy that you got it.
On your fic- Love the small details you put in it, especially the flu-mangle speech and the sentient spoons.
The Midnight Phantomess
2008-01-06 . chapter 1
I love this.
=D

Great job.
angelps7
2007-12-10 . chapter 1
hehe what a cute story! i especially enjoyed the creative inserts throughout the story, u are so awesome! haha so neat and quirky, great job!!
Lampessa
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
That story was a breath of fresh air. I really liked Luna's enchanted spoons.
tallica00
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
Heres to reverse psychology! Honestly this was an amazingly funny story! Great work!
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