yumm yummy oh this is so disgusting but good yaoi story anyway oh yeah he have a wife for crying aloud!

Wow! I loved reading this story! You're a fantastic writer...and this is going straight to my favs list! Good work!

-Romani-chan

That was so hot! I always thought that pairing might work out. Too bad it had to end like that, damn episode 25, had me crying all night long.

I never heard of that song and I'm not too familiar with Josh Groban, but it was still good. The lyrics sound kinda sad.

MORE HUGHES/ARCHER! MORE HUGHES/ARCHER smut!

LOVE IT! I have an Archer/Hughes one shot out too, and I'm super happy to see that someone else wrote about this hot pairing. Great fic!

This was good, really good, Phoenix. You've come a long way sine "You're Still You" and I'm proud. Of course you chose another Josh Groban fic and you sported it well. I also have to know where you got that pairing. I've never heard of it before.

I heard about you KxA story coming up and I want to know I'm looking forward to it (I think you would be good at KxA, and seeing "Hellfire and Brimstone" Kimblee and "Never Let Go" Archer together might be a treat!) But I got off topic...

I can't wait to see more, this is another amazing demonstration of talent. More damn it!

I love all of your work on songfics, especially this one, (didn't like “You're Still You” too much, but you warned me in the beginning that it was going to be kind of corny).

This song of course is a lot darker than the whole "oh damn I love you after all of this time." I could feel the lyrics backing up what Hughes wanted to tell Archer to never let go of the passion that they clearly had both been hiding for ages. And the connection to episode 25 made me really love this.

And I think this pairing is yummy. You should keep up the good work with more Josh Groban and more Archer (he needs more love).

Grobanite

I thought this was an amazing job; it made me cry at the end when Archer was curled up on the bed talking to himself. You should continue with songfics, you're very good with matching the scene to the lyrics and when you take them out (which I did cuz I'm a loser) it still makes a beautiful story. I've never listened to Josh Groban, but this has inspired me to download this song ("Never Let Go", eh?[devious smile]). It sounds kind of sad.

I look forward to seeing what you can come up with next!

I know I'm going to forget to say this so here goes: happy late birthday, Phoenix (sorry for it being so late, I'm such a lazy person). But for a fic posted on your birthday it was so sad, couldn't this have bee AU where Hughes doesn't have to die?

The lemon (no matter how implied) was hot and you didn't focus on the movements, but the feelings running through Archer's body. Yay for doing it standing up even if it did hurt Archer, but you made up for it with a new position.

I love the song (my favorite on the whole Josh Groban CD, I never thought of Hughes x Archer to it though [I've never even thought of Hughes x Archer at all] but glad to see you breaking free of usual pairings (loved Hellfire and Brimstone, need to review!)

Keep up the good work, and don't abandon your huge story, it is coming back right? (Off topic again, he he!)

GOOD JOB!

That was so beautiful, I never really thought anyone listened to that song, but you got the mood of it down solid. "Never Let Go" is about memories, sad ones especially that we should never let slip from our grasp. I never really thought of "Words of Farewell" like that, but I can totally see it happening, there were gaps throughout that whole night.

I love your description of sexual pleasure without saying any naughty words, that was awesome! (If I had an account I'd put this on my favorites) And the pairing is so hot and yummy (both Archer and Hughes are foxes) and it's a shame there aren't many crack pairings out there for people to read (I love crack!)

Keep up the good work, and more crack! (I'm a crack head...)

Yummy pairing! I loved this! Oh, and Happy Birthday too!