You should make this into more than a one shot. It's really good.

nice

This peice was rather weak compared to all your other one-shots, but good nevertheless. I guess it's because I found that I didn't see a real plot in here and there was an abrupt ending.

The whole idea about the cake was interesting though.
And it was a mature peice, not bad at all.

Okay, it's late. I gotta run.
Thanks for writing,
-P.P.V.V.

awesome!! i love this!! are you going to continue it? please do!!

o.word. great.o.

update?
pretty please?

that was a really good story! i loved it, just like all of your other stories!:), you should really carry it on though and not leave it as just a one-shot.

luv it!!

I LOVE IT! In fact I think you should keep going and elaborate!

ooh i loved that episode!

Interesting

Hi!
As usual as all your stuff it was nice. I think it'd be good if you did continue this story. Also the 'Cuddling' story was also really cute!
Can't wait for your next installment!

I enjoyed the story very much! The bit in the church was classic! It was a nice read on the balcony, too. I'm thinking you should add to it...the he** with the one-shot!

Hello darling daughter! Thought I'd leave a review. Anyway, I thought it was sexy, cute, and it's yummy cakeliness involves. Most favourite factors :D

I really have to get back to Macbeth though. Bye!

title was wonderful. story was wonderful. cigarette...seems sort of out of place, and Lily seems like she would have better judgement than that.