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Reviews For: He Takes the Cake

summersgirl2526
2007-08-14
ch 1,
abusenice
P.P.V.V
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abuseThis peice was rather weak compared to all your other one-shots, but good nevertheless. I guess it's because I found that I didn't see a real plot in here and there was an abrupt ending.

The whole idea about the cake was interesting though.
And it was a mature peice, not bad at all.

Okay, it's late. I gotta run.
Thanks for writing,
-P.P.V.V.
raven-haired asian
2006-12-01
ch 1,
abuseawesome!! i love this!! are you going to continue it? please do!!
RubyBinds
2006-11-01
ch 1,
abuseo.word. great.o.
mauraudersminuspeterarehot
2006-07-03
ch 1,
abuseupdate?
pretty please?
codswallop
2006-05-21
ch 1,
abusethat was a really good story! i loved it, just like all of your other stories!:), you should really carry it on though and not leave it as just a one-shot.
curlyque
2006-05-15
ch 1,
abuseluv it!!
famousindafuture
2006-05-13
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE IT! In fact I think you should keep going and elaborate!
sapphire stalker
2006-05-09
ch 1,
abuseooh i loved that episode!
SunshineDaisies816
2006-05-08
ch 1,
abuseInteresting
Moonlight 9
2006-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHi!
As usual as all your stuff it was nice. I think it'd be good if you did continue this story. Also the 'Cuddling' story was also really cute!
Can't wait for your next installment!
zuska1985
2006-05-08
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed the story very much! The bit in the church was classic! It was a nice read on the balcony, too. I'm thinking you should add to it...the he** with the one-shot!
Crys
2006-05-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseHello darling daughter! Thought I'd leave a review. Anyway, I thought it was sexy, cute, and it's yummy cakeliness involves. Most favourite factors :D

I really have to get back to Macbeth though. Bye!
rubber ducky 9
2006-05-07
ch 1,
abusetitle was wonderful. story was wonderful. cigarette...seems sort of out of place, and Lily seems like she would have better judgement than that.
lilalex13
2006-05-07
ch 1,
abuseit's a one-shot? aww man i was looking forward to the next chapter but you crushed my dreams no...sorry back to the review, i really liked it, and i wouldn't know sex and the city never actually watched a whole epsiode, but if i asked my sister she'd know, anyway great story i hope to read some of your stories in future, if you write anymore, anywho great job, bye!
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