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| summersgirl2526 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abusenice |
| P.P.V.V 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis peice was rather weak compared to all your other one-shots, but good nevertheless. I guess it's because I found that I didn't see a real plot in here and there was an abrupt ending. The whole idea about the cake was interesting though. And it was a mature peice, not bad at all. Okay, it's late. I gotta run. Thanks for writing, -P.P.V.V. |
| raven-haired asian 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseawesome!! i love this!! are you going to continue it? please do!! |
| RubyBinds 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseo.word. great.o. |
| mauraudersminuspeterarehot 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseupdate? pretty please? |
| codswallop 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abusethat was a really good story! i loved it, just like all of your other stories!:), you should really carry it on though and not leave it as just a one-shot. |
| curlyque 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseluv it!! |
| famousindafuture 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! In fact I think you should keep going and elaborate! |
| sapphire stalker 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseooh i loved that episode! |
| SunshineDaisies816 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting |
| Moonlight 9 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHi! As usual as all your stuff it was nice. I think it'd be good if you did continue this story. Also the 'Cuddling' story was also really cute! Can't wait for your next installment! |
| zuska1985 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed the story very much! The bit in the church was classic! It was a nice read on the balcony, too. I'm thinking you should add to it...the he** with the one-shot! |
| Crys 2006-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello darling daughter! Thought I'd leave a review. Anyway, I thought it was sexy, cute, and it's yummy cakeliness involves. Most favourite factors :D I really have to get back to Macbeth though. Bye! |
| rubber ducky 9 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abusetitle was wonderful. story was wonderful. cigarette...seems sort of out of place, and Lily seems like she would have better judgement than that. |
| lilalex13 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseit's a one-shot? aww man i was looking forward to the next chapter but you crushed my dreams no...sorry back to the review, i really liked it, and i wouldn't know sex and the city never actually watched a whole epsiode, but if i asked my sister she'd know, anyway great story i hope to read some of your stories in future, if you write anymore, anywho great job, bye! |