CONTINUE!!

Nicly done. I liked how the characters interacted.

wow you are an insanely good writer... lotsa detail and everything, this story was really awesome!! hehe poor albel... i've never had to fight him for the 2nd time because i always get him as my 1st extra member (know what i mean,..?) mostly because it makes me sad when he is defeated T_T especially by fayt >.< hehe but anyways, aweosme story!!

Albel... talks and presumes too much, I guess, but other than that, the characterization was okay. I was slightly surprised, but also pleased with the way things turned out in the end. Let's face it: these two are bound to be together. ^^
The truth is, I totally agree with BlueTrillium's review, so I don't have much more to say. :P

"Albel Nox." A shape stepped out from behind a rocky outcrop, catching the swordsman by surprise; she noted his haggard appearance, his bloodstained tunic. "Have I come at a bad time?"
-> Tunic, yes. Now I know I'm not the only person to use this word in fanfiction about Albel. T_T

Was this a one-shot, or a multi-chaptered story, I wonder? It's not labeled as 'complete', so let's hope there's gonna be more!

This story rocks out loud.

It's very well written and I like how Nel and Albel were portrayed.

You capture the characters completely, although I do think that Albel changed his attitude a little too fast when he caught onto Nel's intentions.

If I may, I would request a sequel... Maybe they hide in Vanilla's work place for a while and... the mind wanders...

Anyways, great job! I love it to bits! Although Albel does seem a bit cheesy at the end. Ah well.

=D

Magnifico!

Pretty good...I like the description, and the characterization for the most part. Spelling and grammar are good as well. And of course, it's got Albel and Nel! ^_^

One particular paragraph I liked:
I bet you do, Nel thought to herself. She knew that Albel was probably so caught up in his angst-ridden quest to better Fayt in combat that the future of Aquaria and Airyglyph barely even mattered to him any more. But, then again, that was precisely why she had come here - to make him see. To make him care. It could be likened to getting blood out of a stone.
-- Especially the second sentence, with Albel's "angst-ridden quest".

And also the different plays on Albel's nickname..."Albel the Presumptuous"... ^_^

I was a bit surprised that no one (especially Albel) made any offended comments about Fayt & Co taking kids (Roger and Peppita) along, but not experienced warriors like himself and Nel. But maybe they didn't know about Roger and Peppita at that point...hmm...

It was also a bit surprising for me that Albel would jump so quickly to the conclusion that Nel was there because SHE needed him...and yet, I CAN see him bringing something like that up just to irritate her, to push her buttons. ^_^

At any rate...I don't see this fic marked as 'Complete'...does that mean there's going to be another chapter? I think it would be interesting to see where this goes if it does continue, but it is also a pretty excellent stand-alone if you want it to just be a one-shot.