Oh very interesting so far. I'm intrigued. You have a few typos, but otherwise, very good!

I *love* how you've worked the meaning of the name Benjamin into this - ironic indeed. Your use of language is wonderful, and I love the pre-chapter quotes.

Oh wow. I am loving this already.

Oh wow... wow. I love this fic! From the delightfully awesome, tone-setting quote at the top :D to your dry "I have not turned into Sondheim since the prologue) :D to your beautifully amazing, deeply descriptive words, to your perfectly placed irony and wit, to your incredible characterization and awesome foreshadowing (yayay!), this fic is a Todd fan's dream come true. Mine, at least! Awesome amazing fic, and I can't wait to see the rest!

This is awesome! I LOVE it... the prose is so beautifully written, and I can't wait to see more!