Awww / sweet and sad. Great job.

More? :D

By the time I reached

"I want to feel needed."

I was like: AW! Then when I read the sentence where Ed pulled out a blade I was like "NO EDWARD NO!"

w I'm loving your stories so far! Don't disspoint me! Lol I'm kidding. I'm sure I'll like them..unless one of them maes me love it so much and its such a sad story then I'll have to hate cuz I hate crying. Unless it's for a good thing.

What happened?

Did he die or didn't he?

Did they get together or didn't they?

Did Roy feel the same or didn't he?

I have to know!

It was still brilliant, but sad! Please do a sequel or a Roy P.O.V. or something!

Dark Kaiser

ok this hurt to read. . . i can really relate to what ed was going through, i know it all to well. . . everyday. . . great job

kool

ek! o the suspence! hope roy saved him.

nice start, hope to read more soon!

This was a very good story and i hope you write moer

I really like this fic just a few problems with spelling though..

"Allright, Edward." Roy said, he was sligtly confused, "Hey, what's wring now?"

wrong is spelt incorrectly.

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At the same moment Ed had entered his room Roy had finidhed the puzzle in his head and he ran out to find Ed.

i'm not sure if that is finished or figured...

anyway hope to read more of your stuff!

xoxo the mad one!

I found you on youtube, and I had to check out your fanfiction!

Ek! How dare you! (I'm the only one who can let Ed be emo! :P)

Good so far, I love the emotion! Update soon!

-Kay

i loved it...this is faketohma from youtube...very sorrowful

TT.TT *snif-snif* wow... are you going to continune plz let me know if you do! *snif-snif* Roy x Ed forever!

awe how sad! I have to say I saw your screename in a youtube vid and Thought I'd look it up! And I'm really liking your stories! keep it up, I wanna know what happens! later,

Himawari

-squints through tears- omg u made me cry TT_TT this.is.good.i totatlly feel for ed.TT_TT wah.good job.

not bad.