Hi

That was a good story.

Nicely plotted and executed. I really enjoyed this, and hope to read more of your work. Thanks.

That was wow very good!

I enjoyed the interactions of the characters relationships especially through Syndey's eyes. Simply said it was a great story with a touch of sadness to it.

That wasnt just good, it was brilliant.

More please!

Couldnt stop reading this story again and again.

Thank you

This was wonderful. I can totally see this scenario taking place. Great job, great characterization. I'm looking forward to reading more by you.

Beautiful

Excellent. Very well written. I always enjoy your work...

loved the details of the night. great story, please write more.

Another great story!