I also wasn't fond much of the cursing either.

Ok, pretty good so far. Now that we know she's being tortured in her nightmares, what exactly IS the nightmare? Update soon. And please work on her grammar and spelling.

Sounds good.

Loved it.

Keep writing,

Motherduckatschool

i love this story...the writing and the plot is fantastic :)please continue

I can't believe what I just read. That was one of the most horrible things I have seen on this site in a long time.

First of all, this isn't a story. This is just a lame profile for some Mary Sue original character that nobody cares about.

Secondly, your spelling and grammar makes me want to punch myself in the eyes. You didn't even capitalize your title.

Last of all, how old are you? Thirteen? Ten? Seven? Beginning a story with a long boring description of a character's looks and qualities is one of the worst writing errors you can make. I stopped doing that before I got out of elementary school.

Hope you gain some talent from me since I make such great yaoi fics and your just a spic that crossed the border.

Pretty good story. Can't wait for your next chapter.:)

Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

wow... i lost any hope in update after 6 month's. Nice to see that you returned to this story. I'm holding my thumbs for more frequent updates :)

I speak for all ROLO fans when i say "keep up good work".

is she dreaming of him being tortured? someone please! update me

very sweet, only thing I didn't like was all the cursing (even if the title and the descrip warned me :D)

*((jAdE))*

nice story! Really cute and I like the Logan/Ororo relationship

oO, what was her dream about? Update so I can find out!

i love it!

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More please.