|Reviews for Broken Eyes|
| DuelMaster27 5/18/06 . chapter 1
it was good but i would use less ryhming well thats just me in me poetry i dont ryhm that much but people write poetry diffrently then anyone. So I liked it (less ryhming) (:
| lozerz r us 5/11/06 . chapter 1
I like it!
| bespektacled 5/9/06 . chapter 1
AH! you called the bunny becky! She is pure evil! *glares*
| XEye-Of-The-WolfX 5/8/06 . chapter 1
aww it makes me wanna cry ((sniff))it was great!
| iwriteokstories 5/7/06 . chapter 1
Wow the ryming (sp?) Went well and it told a sad but very convincing story of Zuko's life! 5/5
| gizmo-gal 5/7/06 . chapter 1
Nice. i like it!