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Scarlet the FireFox20 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseHi, you know who I am, I hope. I was a devoted fan to "Antiliberation", which you delted off of . :( Anyways, there is one typo I noticed: 1) You're destroyed what I held most dear. I think you meant: 1) You've destroyed what I held most dear. As for the narrator my first guess was actually Kikyo. I thought it was Kikyo because the rotting and the unsympathetic look from InuYasha would have made more sense. I thought that maybe Kagome finally killed Kikyo. But as I read on I realized that it couldn't be Kikyo if the love plot from InuYasha was being adherred to. So I came to the conclusion that Kagome was talking about InuYasha and the way he constantly treated her like shit. The emotions in the lyrics and the different sections are so powerful and easy to relate to. I think the repetition of 'crunch' worked really well in the piece to connect InuYasha's coming to Kagome and to connect his leaving with the added breaking of her heart. You developed the narrator and the antagonist very well and kept them both in character, if in fact InuYasha is the 'you' that Kagome's referring to. Kudos To You, Scarlet (or Haley)
Furuutsu 2007-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked it, even though it seemed a bit depressing at the end... but I guess that means you've gotten feelings across or something like that. Anyway, I thought of, almost all the way through except when my mind tried to place where I've heard the actual song, was that this was Kikyou talking about Inuyasha, or maybe the whole world in general. Sometimes I get the feeling that she feels abandoned more than anything, you know? Well, I loved the one shot, very nice.
Ama 2006-05-08 ch 1, anon.	abuselooks around, then taps on the review box I hope it works this time... o_o Anyway, uber squee-ness! That was wicked awesome. gives a cookie Huzzah! confetti
VileVileCrocodile 2006-05-08 ch 1,	abuseEither Kag/Inu or Sango/Miroku
JediK1 2006-05-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery descriptive! The repetition of phrases got a little heavy sometimes, but I think in this case it helps tie the song and the betrayal theme together. Great job!
Red Kitsune Flames 2006-05-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful... I mean sad! You never disappoint. At first it seemed like Inuyasha was narrator, and talking about Kagome, Then it seemed like he was talking about either sesshy or Kikyo. Then it seemed like Kagome talking about Inuyasha. For a brief time it also seemed like sesshy's POV about Inuyasha. So basically it jumps around a lot... Lol, you really made me think though.
anonymous 2006-05-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseWAH!jumps on Risa-chan it was soo good!1 i wanna read it over and over^^ I KNEW it was because of Inuyasha and that whore Kikyo>__

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