I really like this story. I think that you did a fantastic job of showing Nooj's and Paine's personality. I was also pleasantly surprised by the idea of Rikku and Nooj having a brief affair. Who would have thought that they would get together at all? Please write another chapter!

Aw! I really like this and I can't believe that no one has reviewed this yet! Your characterization is wonderful, I can really see this happening between the two of them. Keep up the good work!