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| Fangirlfan 2007-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseIt was alright. Your stories are very descriptive and engaging Demz~ but this little vignette kind of left me feeling mokay, almost as if it were a commercial for the story insted of the story itself. Since I don't play the game I only read for the content and conformity to the confines of the game characters doesn't really exist for me. Every story I read (I'm going from top to bottom) is very visual for me and your writing quite good. You have a novel away from fandom in you girl I feel it. |
| Angevar 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseInterestin' team set-up you've got here. *nods* Very interestin'. It'd be great to see this go somewhere, but hey, you're the author. I /am/ getting some pretty delectable juju vibes from it, tho'. :] |
| AttackingHentaiChibisLoveFl... 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI love your works so much. T.T |
| Rebel Shadowknight 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseHi, my name's Rebel. It took me a while to figure out the whole plot, but I must say, you are very good at writing. I'll have to read some more of your stuff when I have some free time. |
| Genderless 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing. I can't imagine Jak would make a more compassionate cop than freedom fighter, but I'm sure on any world he likes things to go boom. I think I might read Jak fanfics just for Daxter, and you write him so well. If you do continue, I will be waiting. |