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| Hallas 2008-02-04 ch 2, | abuseWhy has this not been updated in almost two years? This is too good to let go to waste!! ~Hallas |
| Chubby-King-Chocobo 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseBeautifuly written prose on emotions. You gotta love their interactions. Fai just wants to enjoy what time he has left and Kuro-tan only broods XD;;. Father indeed. Anyway, I found it sweet what Kuro-tan said in the first chapter, that Fai has that much potential to love. Indeed Fai is self destructive, may he find solarence. |
| WhiteWolfCub 2007-10-27 ch 2, | abuseThis was so good! I was so happy to be able to read this, you did a really great job, I'm impressed. Your writing style is really intense and the characters are so in character, I was relieved. Do you think you could give me the URL to your website? I tried looking in your profile but I'm not sure if any of those links were the ones I needed... |
| Kyrene once Blood Roses 2007-04-23 ch 2, | abuseI was wondering like crazy how you were going to make Fay make sense from the last chapter. I knew you were going to just because you were hinting at it like crazy. This was awesome...Like crazy awesome. Like perfect awesome. I, personally, can see Fay being hard to write since he's...Fay...but it was done perfectly and awesomely (had to say it again). And I loved the end, I was waiting for Kurogane to snap and throw him in the water...This was just as good, hehe. |
| vanishingact 2006-10-08 ch 2, | abuseIt would be awesome if you updated! ( '-')/ |
| Milai Sapphire 2006-10-08 ch 2, | abuseI loved this fic. Excellent job. ^_^ Haven't read much of the manga (and only saw season 1 of the anime), but I loved it anyway. |
| vampslyr 2006-09-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseShit, he's doing it this way to keep Kurogane from getting too close and coming to care about Fay? That's just sick, he seriously needs some help. I can understand him just wanting to get lost in feelings and forget his past, but when that festering pit in his soul finally opens up and releases his pent up emotions it's gonna be ugly. And there he is berating Kurogane for keeping things bottled up. I'd like to see more of this and see where you're going to take it. |
| darkangel36 2006-09-10 ch 2, | abuseaw!! this is so cute!! i like it lots...but i really have to read it lol...you know what i mean?? i have to reread some spots...lots of stuff to take in but its awesome! ^_^ |
| DemonUntilDeath 2006-09-09 ch 2, | abuseThat was great! I loved that little wrap up! |
| Duchessa 2006-09-09 ch 2, | abuseI admit I didn't like the first chapter. Couldn't bring myself to finish it, actually. It wasn't that the writing is bad, but the characterizations just felt way, way off for me. On a whim, I decided to skim through the second chap and...I. WAS. HOOKED. Your Fay POV really put a different spin of the story. He isn't a weak masochistic angstbunny who thinks himself only good for sex, he's a morally corrupt person, unapologetic about it, yet still manages to be a nice guy. 'Maybe it was cowardly to be selfish. He didn't mind that. If it didn't hurt anyone, didn't lead him to fail anyone who needed him, he didn't mind that at all.' That line sums up all my love for your Fay. Awesome, awesome chapter. ps. I think I might now this doujinshi you're refering to... |
| flying metal child 2006-09-09 ch 2, | abuseThanks for the link, I'll be sure to check it out. Fay is so fatalistic in everything he approaches, or so you've made him out to be; I like him this way :x |
| flying metal child 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseJesus that was delicious!! Kurogane's insight to his "relationship" with Fay is painful. I'm looking forward to reading the next part...so here I go :D |
| evvy 2006-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh wow! I realy liked this! I was stunned you were the author because I always loved your music videos to death XD If you made a Tsubasa one to kurofai I'd probably wet myself XD But really, good job on this fic! |
| Haverstock 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. This was /stunning/. You are a brilliant writer. |
| illsprawl 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is fascinating. I really wish there had been a little more focus on Fai and Kurogane during the Shurano arc in the manga itself, but CLAMP just sort of breezed right over them. Such wasted potential for fun! Fai and Kurogane are more believable here than in the majority of other fics I've read lately. Kurogane in particular, given his conflicting emotions regarding Fai, his moral duty, and his own lust, is wonderful to read. And poor brain-damaged Fai, sacrificing his own dignity for simple human contact! *_* I love this fic! I love it. But...I'm confused. Will this be continued? Judging by the date you uploaded it, I'm going to assume not. |