i like this. it was very realistic (you hit teenage angst on the head. believe me i know) and the writing was pretty good.

In the sentence:

He had found it extremely difficult to forgive his friends, and this was shown through in the way he handled himself at the New Years’ party and whenever he was close to Harry and Hermione.

Two options for this one:

1. "...this shone through in..."
2. "...this was shown through the..."

In: Harry’s glare disappeared on his face, to be replaced with a small smile. “I know,” he said, “So am I.”

The 'S' in 'So' should be lowercase.

In: Hermione said warningly, sitting up in the bed and reaching for her tank top which was down the other end of the bed.

...which was down at the...

In: “Because I don’t want to get carried away,” Hermione said reasonably, biting her bottom lip slightly, “You know how many times it’s almost happened.”

I would recommend a period after 'slightly' as both parts of the quote are a complete sentence.

Now, analysis.

I was very impressed with this story. As I mentioned in a review for one of your oneshots, I don't often find myself reading Het. Mainly because I've seen so many horrible ones I was scared away. That being said, I really enjoyed this.

Your grammar and spelling are good. I enjoyed the plot and I was impressed with how you kept everyone in character, which not many people bother to do these days.

Thank you for sharing!

-Kay

Hello again,

In this sentence:

“Yeah,” Ginny said automatically, “But he’s not as angry as he was when he first found out.”

The 'B' in 'But' should be lowercase. When the dialogue tag interrupts the dialogue, the first letter of the first word of the continuing dialogue is always lowercase, unless it is a proper noun.

-Kay

Hello,

I wanted to point out an error I found, because your grammar has been perfect up until now, and I would want someone to tell me.

In this sentence:

Harry sighed and looked up at Ron, whose face was slowly turning red. “You how I broke up with Cho?”

It should be: "You know how..."

Also, the town is spelled, Hogsmeade, not Hogsmead.

Wonderful story so far, thanks for sharing.

-Kay

good idea showing how ron reacted and covering him and hermione dating. i dont think i've seen that done before, but if i have not as well. great job ^^ amazing fic ^^

Really Cute Story!!

Nice story- shortish, sweetish and full to bursting of fluff... just the way we like it. My friend is gonna love me for reading a H/Hr- I don't usually and she adores them. This is a great story- good writing style. I'll recommend it to her,
*Bree*

How cheesy indeed!
Thats alright. Glad it ended on a good not for the trio.
Great story as always!

I like the story. its a good story!

xD
m. cheesyness.
I love your stories.
Read them all last night..^^
You got a fan out of me.

~ Xavier

hey BeaumontRulz, I've been reading your fics and they're great. Some fluffy, some romantic etc...keep up the good work, and I especially love the oneshots.

really really great story love it!

Well, I just read your whole story and I must say, it was amazing. I think it's one of the best stories I've ever read, let alone the best Harry/Hermione fic. I'm going to go read some of your other ones because I'm sure they are beautiful. Do hope it's alright if I haven't reviewed on every chapter and just the last one... well... great job, I loved it.

.sugarhighgemini

yaay, I finally got time to read the story :D hehe :P

I loved it :) Very cute.
And I'm glad everything turned out to be okay, also for your friend :)

I hope you're getting along with that other story now too ^^

Love always
Tamar

Nice job! I look foward to reading more of your stories!