Hi. *pause* Yeah, I got an account here. Mostly to leave signed reviews and have Author Alert...

I like the difference of talking style you have the different characters here. It's distinctive, and speaks for you as an author (and drama student) to be able to think/converse in various personalities. I also like the various hints dropped of previous sulphur-based experiment #6...no doubt we know who he is. "ethical socialization flaw" Hee hee.

An unique and intriguing take on the beginning of our world. Really like this one. (But still adore "The Freak" more.)

-Izzy J.

hey, i saw your fanfic on your resume on the bbs just now when i think you were online or something. Great story :)

That was amazing! The specimen no666 made of sulphur was a brilliant touch. Great work!

very interesting...good work! -Sidhe

I liked that. It was fun...Keep writing...

I liked that, very creative, good ideas. Finally getting around to reviewing, after you've reviewed tons of my stuff eh? Oh well, this is good, keep writing!

cool!

::laughs:: Now that's fun take...

What a creative way putting creation like that! Sounds really sci-fi like, almost like a Star Trek episode! )

Well, you keep writing, Noah, and I'll keep reading!

GOD BLESS!

This is a nicely written story. I guess no one ever thinks about what ever happened BEFORE the beginning. That's why I like the end, where you wrote those words. Anyway, if anyone tries to flame this story for some STRANGE reason (like they did to mine, even though it's a kids story) I'd like to say, "WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!"

*sorry*

Hmmm... I like it! A very interesting way of presenting God. Really creative, because although, I DO believe that God created everything, I sometimes wonder about the whole Adam and Eve thing. This is a cool way of telling the story differently, and still keeping the essence the same.

cool

Hey, this is pretty kewl! I like it!

ain't that kind of... hmmm well i must admit it was cleverly written and certain stuff were surprising but still...

What I like is that you have invented (and used) many different styles of writing over time. You are a very polific writer with lotsa potential, keep it up.