Nice description of the light, it's an idea that I can believe and yet had never though of, I think I'll remember these different kinds ^_^. Again nice description, the atmosphere is explained well so nice work! Your description of the house made me actually see it, I like how you help me implant myself into your work, it's relaxing a little. I like the way you used the short sentences to show the bluntness and emotional impact of the scene, I want to see the sun too. Nice word choice it really captures the scene, I love your work so much.

I like the use of energy you show, that probably sounds weird but hopefully you understand what I mean. I like how you made Kyo but there is room for improvement perhaps the use of internal thought instead of words, like a put down that isn't said, could help. Excellent interaction I'm really captivated by this scene. I feel so sad for Kyo all locked inside, it's too sweet and it seems he's lost his energy. *hugs him* Wow, what happened to Yuki *kinda confused about this,* it's very sad though. These thoughts are great, this kind of internal monolog. I think I actually am going to add you to my favorite author list, that makes two people on the list.

Months Earlier:
I love the relationship between the two of them and you've got the characterization perfect or at least I think so. Their communication is fantastic as well, no complaints as of yet. I don't think that Tohru would talk about this type of thing at least not for such a small thing as being scared and the characterization on Tohru lacks as you move on, she'd be shyer than this, not insecure but not coy like this either. I love Tohru's determination about love, just like when Kyo asked her to move with him. I love the ending.
Good Work
~Myst

This was rather sad as well cause there together yet she knows and he doesnt know that she does :( I feel so sorry for him in the cage but it's like Haru to sneak in visits

Hmm, Im feeling abit ambivalent right now. I really enjoyed Akito torturing Kyo, but I dont like that Tohru hit on him and kissed him. Even though I could care less about pairing at this point, I dont like seeing Kyo with the girl cause I greatly dislike him...Ah, otherwise, I like your characterization of Kyo, thought it was unusually optimistic given his circustance.Maybe Tohru has rub off on him.

Hm.. I may have used complex a few times. Mostly compound and estate, though.

First section is deep and pretty. Give me a few days to mull it over, and I'll decide exactly how I'm going to interpret and apply it... Can you forgive me for being vague for now?

... once again... I should just save reviewing for the end. The story is too enthralling to do otherwise.

I think I can picture mature-Kyou behaving this way, yesh.

Is a very beautiful story. Bravo.

-Windswift

Ack, Kyo and Tohru together? I hate it. But still, I love your fics very much.

Aww... I felt like crying... His nightmare was scary though...

And all the sunlight and firelight was really thoughtful... Keep writing please~!

Ah, Alice you never cease to amaze me. I really do love reading your fics. I'll actually have to update Perfection and Nightmares soon ((such a bad cookie am i)) But i really love this one

Oh God! Phenomenal. I'm afraid this little box won't hold my review - and I have a final test in Oh NO! 30 mins. I will PM later.

Literally stunned,
HulaHula

Aw, thaat's so sad, they finally say how much they loved one another then he gets locked away... I loved it! Hm, it was very well written and the emotion was just...there, if you know what I mean. Once again I loved it.
that's all for now.
cya.