please update

Just wondering if you will finish this story. Thanks

Really, really interesting strt to this fic. I love how you've made Jack and Kyra very similar but very different at the same time. I look forward to more.

This story is kickass. That's all there is to it.

I really love this story at first I did not get the whole kyra thing but know I understand it a bit more I hope you update soon (\__/)
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Nice origin story for Kyra! I've been a little mixed on this -- well written, but having Riddick and Jack start their, um, relationship so early, even without consummation, is close to my squick line. But that cloning move is a darn nice touch.

When will you be updating. It's a great story and I hope you will continue it through to the end.

Thanks.

Oh my god, this is amazing! You've covered so many plot holes the movies left and have cleverly twisted it all into this totally believable work of art. I am in awe and I bow! Please please update soon and continue this fic as I can't wait to see where you take our Furyan friends. Kyra being a clone (that's what I gathered from it as there was no male to influence the growth and she's identical down to her fingerprints to Jack. I loved how Jack's split personality became the clone's soul. I've always wondered if clones have souls as they weren't made naturally. Wonderful job, keep up the great work!~Nef~

Hey, good chapter. Please don't take too long to update. I almost can't wait to read what happens next.

From the first chapter, i knew this fiction would be something special. The characters and dialogue are spot on and the plot is truly fantastic! I would whole heartedly recommending to publish a fiction like this if it wern't for the copyrights. Damn.
Anyway, your work is done so beautifully that even the I ache for the next chapter and wish it would be posted quicker, the time spent is well worth the wait.
Thank you for letting me read your fiction.

That was just...just dark. I was warned. Please stop Carolyn she's gonna screw it up I know it! I need an Update.

Kia

They are so not gonna be left alone. What's with Jack not telling Riddick about Shira? How did she give the older man peace?? I'm hooked I need an update.

Kia

I love this story. I just found it. Canm't type more gotta read!!
Kia

When will you post the next chapter? It's a great story so don't stop now. I would like to know what happens next. Thanks!

Aww, poor Kyra/Jack but I understand the evolution of Kyra now. This chapter was amazing and needed to get the story futher than where you had it and I loved it. I can't wait for more. I would write a longer reply but I'm at work. Just know that I love your story and your writing and sorry for the tyops!