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| Twilight Dove 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseYou're metaphor was great. I really like it. Especially since you were able to describe it in such a vivid detail. I say, it's a very wonderful work. Although not much of story with an actual plot, it was still amazing the way you were able to compare Anna's weakness and strength with ice. Keep up the good work! XD...Keep Writing! ^-^ |
| Ice-princess-Natalie 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was so nice!! You're good with words!! |
| Tici-chan 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseYour fic is very pretty! Congratilations! Kisses, My princess Anna :) |
| Rayame325 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHi, Yoh nailed Anna exactly, except sometimes she does show that she cares. I really liked this!! I can't wait to read more of your stories! Rayame325 |
| Ally-Kat722 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! The metaphor is a good one, and I like how you maintain it all the way through. Very nice with the descriptions and everything! Keep it up! |
| dragonspirit888 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseSugoi! I really like how you compare Anna to ice and described all her qualities perfectly. ^^ Awesome one-shot. Kano |
| Nightglider 2006-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, I actually could taste ice in my mouth...Great story! |