*hihi*

Great!

Oh, this is *so* good!! Heart-stopping and hilarious! You've got the characterisation down perfectly, and I could not take my eyes off the screen as I read. The action, the descriptions, the dialogue, the brotherly banter -- all perfect! I'll be keeping this one for whenever I need a good fright... and a good laugh!

LMAO. Fabulous!!

Jackie

That was truly funny, Im still laughing.
Enjoyed this one very much. Keep up the good work!

That was nice. I liked it.

Okay, WHEZING with laughter. It started with "Dean's shot had messed the thing up somewhat..." I think it was the 'somewhat', just you know, CONDITIONAL, somehow. Oh, great. And you know, I don't think anyone's going to stop you now. BigPink

"It's a one-horned, one-eyed flying purple people eater!" Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. I don't know about stupidest, but DEFINITELY the funniest monster ever! Were you listening to the song when you wrote this? Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.