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| necira 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI hope that you haven't given up on this story. It was getting really interesting, especially with the suspect's point of view-and the last lines of chapter 2 hint that there is more to come. please update... |
| lil'spencefan 2006-06-28 ch 2, | abuseThat was really good! I want to know what the criminal has planned next, and I also want to know what/who His Star is. UPDATE SOON! |
| lauren hedgehog 2006-06-27 ch 2, | abuseoh!! Very intreiging and suspensful! :-) I think you've written the characters really well and that you writing style is awesome. I can't wait to see where your plot is going - it's very suspensful so I hope that there is more soon :-) |
| wraiths-angel 2006-06-27 ch 2, | abuseanother good chapter, interested to find out who his 'Star' is and what has the Killer got planned? Looking forward to the the next chapter |
| necira 2006-06-26 ch 2, | abuseinteresting 2nd chapter. I'm interested to see what comes next,, especially about "his Star". Is "his Star" a person (oneof the team?) or something else? |
| csiwolfe08 2006-06-26 ch 2, | abuseInteresting so far, please continue soon. |
| karmine 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseRockin 1st chapter! ;D Like were the story's going so far! :) Hope ya update soon! :D:D:D |
| wraiths-angel 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abusethis was a really good astart, can't wait for the next chapter and find out what happens! |