it sucks dick

oh lawd

kewl

This was such a beautiful story, as well as Twilight:My Version. The writing was descriptive, the character portrayals amazing. I really loved how you made Leafpool look to herself for answers. I love Leafpool (and Leaf x Crow), but in the books I was always screaming for Leafpool to stop asking StarClan about everything. This was brilliant and I hope to read more of your stories in the future.

I really really like this story...it's amazing! XD

This chapter should be about Squirrelflight. I mean I am a Brambleclaw Squirrelflight lover and i wish you wrote about there love instead of Leafpool and Crowfeather. I wish you can put more romance and love in your stories. Otherwise, your stories are really really quite awesome!

I prefer this to the original Sunset :). Leafpool and Crowfeather have always meant to be ...

Why does hawkfrost want brambleclaw to meet him?

i WANNA YOU TO WRITE A LOT MORE!

WHY TAWNYPELT? WHY?

rowanCLAN?

but it said in code of the clans that the reason a cat had to have an apprentice to become deputy is because they need to be used to giving orders. Apparently that kind of experience comes from having an apprentice. Just to let you know.

PS: and you made this before cats of the clans was published, i think, so it's okay.

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yay!

what was leafpools warning?