This was great. Keep writing, lemme tell ya, I read this thing three times already, and I'm not gonna stop at three!

wow...how tearly. i have that same lump in my throat that trunks had. wow...nicely written and just very good.

Excellent for two major reasons. One, it's not a piece of mindless fluff. It's thick with story and thought, clearly not just playtime on the keyboard. And two, it's well constructed with no ghastly leaps (as too often happens with other writers) in transition of scenes. It's smooth - nicely written. Your talent is obvious. I wish you well.

That was really good! I liked it.

this fic is AWSOME! it has a beatiful story to, plus Bra is one of my fav characters. you have a lot of talent, don't ever change your uniqueness