Good insights into Ronon's former life - very scary!! No wonder he's prone to shoot first and ask questions later. I loved his short analysis of the Atlantis people and their comments on his writing.

Reading Ronon's history, making this therapeutic trek with him, has made me want to clasp him to my breast and comfort him! Sadly, it would cause him to invest in more writing to get over my attentions. Great content. I was able to see this so easily.

This is an awesome story! It completely sounded like it was from Ronon's pov... great job!

What a wonderful fic ga.

You did a wonderful job giving a voice to Ronon in this way, and we learn so much about what happened to him before he came to Atlantis.

I can't wait to read your next fic.

Okay that was excellent. Can't believe no-one has thought to write Ronon's story before. Your writing is descriptive and absorbing and the story is very believable. You have really captured Ronon's voice and his character. FAb fic.

Excellent story! The writers of SGA couldn't have done a better job explaining how Ronon got where he is.

Interesting backstory for Ronon! And I liked the vehicle you used to tell the story. Of course Beckett and Heightmeyer would want him to tell of his experiences. The other characters' reactions to Heightmeyer were rather amusing. :-)