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| causeiambetta 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusei don't think this was meaningless at all. I liked it. had alot of inner truth to it. the taking back of sasuke threw me for a loop though |
| Nee-chan8 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, it really fits each character: Naruto, wanting to exist, be remembered, remembered as a hero. Drowning in a pool of lies. Neji, needing to break free from his cage, acting strong speeking confidently, but afraid of destiny and truth. Chouji, wanting respect, praise, encouragement. Afraid that he's not strong enough. Kiba, fighting to be heard, and known, never alone, but feels the loneliest. Losing hope, no one sees or hears him. No one will come to save him. Afraid of disappearing, someday they will see him, but, what if its to late? Shikamaru, fights because he has to, for them. I can relate to alot of that, except Shikamaru, I want respect, to be remembered,to break free of my cage, to be seen and heard. But, I'm drowning in hate and lies, I fear fate,I fear that I'm not strong enough,I'm not enough,I'm loud to be heard and fight to be known, I am never quite alone, yet I feel like the loneliest person in the world, I am losing hope, no one will ever come to save me. I'm afraid of disappearing, of being swallowed in the world, never seen again, I'll be gone and no one will notice. Maybe, someone will see me, but, by then it'll be too late. Sorry for the extra long review, needed to get it out somewhere. Ja ne. |
| naash 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseawesome oneshot...good job |
| Paprika012345 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abusehey! this was a really good drabble. i liked how they all have their dif. reasons to fight and yet their reasons to fight are all the same. good work:) |
| HinatasBiggestFanBoy 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHOLY **! i loved it! so godamn touching! touche my friend, touche. godamn you have no idea how much i loved it |
| Kage-Ichihashi 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work, Miko Kyoko. Great weaving of the words and emotions. Keep it up. |