 Nee-chan8 2006-05-10 . chapter 1Awesome, it really fits each character: Naruto, wanting to exist, be remembered, remembered as a hero. Drowning in a pool of lies.
Neji, needing to break free from his cage, acting strong speeking confidently, but afraid of destiny and truth. Chouji, wanting respect, praise, encouragement. Afraid that he's not strong enough. Kiba, fighting to be heard, and known, never alone, but feels the loneliest. Losing hope, no one sees or hears him. No one will come to save him. Afraid of disappearing, someday they will see him, but, what if its to late? Shikamaru, fights because he has to, for them. I can relate to alot of that, except Shikamaru, I want respect, to be remembered,to break free of my cage, to be seen and heard.
But, I'm drowning in hate and lies, I fear fate,I fear that I'm not strong enough,I'm not enough,I'm loud to be heard and fight to be known, I am never quite alone, yet I feel like the loneliest person in the world, I am losing hope, no one will ever come to save me. I'm afraid of disappearing, of being swallowed in the world, never seen again, I'll be gone and no one will notice. Maybe, someone will see me, but, by then it'll be too late. Sorry for the extra long review, needed to get it out somewhere. Ja ne. |