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tae60
2006-05-15
ch 2, anon.
abusePlease get a beta! A 'shot to the heart' is fatal...you're dead. Now, a bullet may nick the heart, or lodge near the heart and the victim survive, but 'shot in the heart'... sorry, you lost me at that point; I can't suspent my disbelief enough to continue.
odeepblue
2006-05-11
ch 3,
abuseAMEN!

lol, i loved this... U ROCK!
sparky-chan123
2006-05-10
ch 3,
abuseyay! I love it! I can't wait till tomorrow to watch part 1 of the season finale... (but what happened to brass? is he gonna die? probably not... except you never mentioned it...)

also, have you looked at the pic recently on they changed it AGAIN! now every time you scrool over sara's face, it turns to look in the direction of Grissom and Catherine...
man if you can't figure it out by now, you gotta be dense... I just hope this doesn't mean the end of the series... like it usually does.
Dar
2006-05-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseAbsolutely fabulous!!
smokeinmirror
2006-05-10
ch 3,
abuseThis is just perfect. Now all I can wish for is that the actual episode would at least be half as good as this one!
jacey05
2006-05-10
ch 3,
abuseThis was lovely. Wonderfully written. Very true to the spoilers. Hopefully it will turn out like this on the show. What a coincidence, you own a pair of rose colored glasses, too? There seem to be an abundance of those lately. ;)

CJ
lovalley
2006-05-10
ch 3,
abuseThe end?? No! Great job!
Domo Arigato
2006-05-10
ch 3,
abuse"The End and hopefully the beginning for GSR canon!"
And may all our dreams come true. Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us, I'm glad you didn't keep it private.
jtbwriter
2006-05-10
ch 2,
abuseI like this-slow but steady is more real and tender here! LOL!

Thanks for the way Sara told Gris to kiss her-very romantic!

Now what??:)
sparky-chan123
2006-05-10
ch 2,
abuseYES! I have been waiting for that for so long... it's almost like I'm watching the episode as I'm reading, and I can see that kiss in my head! Ever since I saw "Butterflied" (S4 Ep12), I've been waiting for something like that to happen...

I think the only thing that's different between your story and the way I'm imagining it, is the situation with Lyndsey... and I pictured them starting out the show celebrating Greg's birthday... just before they get the call about the body and the hostage at the casino.

please, please, please update soon! I can hardly wait for the real episode... don't make me wait for yours... please? ^_^U
Disenchantment
2006-05-10
ch 2, anon.
abuseI love it... It made my little GSR heart flutter. I hope to all that is good and true that you somehow work for CBS and this is a copy of the script or that this is a confirmed fact... (Joking)

I could not have written anything better!
sparky-chan123
2006-05-09
ch 1,
abuseoh man! that's exactly what I thought was going to happen...
I refused to believe that it was brass in that photo on but the more I think about it, it's the only possible choice...

it's holly gribbs all over again...

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Well this one was so good I had to comment already... so be ready to receive two from me at once; cause I'm really likin' this take on the season finale! ^_^
odeepblue
2006-05-09
ch 2,
abusewow, amazing how you pull something so beautiful with so much well balanced chaos ;)
jbr12476
2006-05-09
ch 2,
abuseOh this chapter freaking rocked! Loved how Sara is being the storng one for everybody. Cant wait for the next chapter. And I can't wait for Grissom to get rid of there phones/pagers.
paganmelly
2006-05-09
ch 2,
abuseExcellent story!! I love it! Thank you for updating quickly.

Melly )O(
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