Wow, great work! :)

May I say that I really loved the inferences in this work. I could feel her sense of relief and the analogy of air as a rescue from the ominous spectrum of water... her weakness and nemesis. Truly it's her kryptonite.

Aang treating her with such gentleness and warmth was also excellent, lending to the fullness of the moment.

Normally she is afraid to fly, but in his arms...

Just beautiful!

Please write a follow up.

Umm, good, but could have been better.

OH! This is so awesome! I feel like writing a fanfic.

Maybe I will. But, it's gonna be either a 3/4 or Taiream. Can't decide. Now this. Oh, the cuteness! :p

Ah, another beautiful oneshot. I really liked the ending, "and suddenly Toph wasn't so blind anymore" and also how in the water she was everything her parents wanted her to be and everything she was not.

Your use of descriptives are amazing.

Téa

Ah...how sweet. :)

Short and sweet. Just the way I like it. Or you could say it's short and tangy. Taangy, tangy...what's the difference? ...ah...I'll shut up now.

This is a fave.

Keep Writing.

write more i want to know what happends next.

lol, well it was cute

But I guess it was OOC on Toph's part, but this was written before 'The Chase' aired. So yeah, I'm pretty sure you know why Toph's jsut missing some of her character.

But anyways, besides that, it was awesome! D

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Hey. This was a really great fanfic! I loved it. Especially since it's about my favorite charrie Toph Bei Fong. Great detail, short, and sweet.

Aw. Thats sweet. Poor toph, can you imagine how scary that would be? I once had a problem with my eyes wich meant i couldnt see for about 2 weeks. There had been an accident, I'd rather not go into it, too scary. But when i woke up i couldnt see. Man, I was terrified! Luckily it was only temporary.

That was good. I Really likedi t. i Might be blind like Toph, but i have Katara's personalit yand elemtn, so therefore, I'm at home in the water. I thirst for its' depths and I'm comforted by its presnece and movements. The story was great! Please write mroe soon!

Lauren

good..but...that's it?

Really pretty drabble, I had the water idea for my ZUko/Toph fanfic, but you got there first.

Still, your imagery rocked!

Great story!