Ah, another beautiful oneshot. I really liked the ending, "and suddenly Toph wasn't so blind anymore" and also how in the water she was everything her parents wanted her to be and everything she was not.

Your use of descriptives are amazing.

~Téa

Ah...how sweet. :)

Short and sweet. Just the way I like it. Or you could say it's short and tangy. Taangy, tangy...what's the difference? ...ah...I'll shut up now.

This is a fave.

Keep Writing.

write more i want to know what happends next.

lol, well it was cute ^^
But I guess it was OOC on Toph's part, but this was written before 'The Chase' aired. So yeah, I'm pretty sure you know why Toph's jsut missing some of her character.

But anyways, besides that, it was awesome!! =D
~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Hey. This was a really great fanfic!! I loved it. Especially since it's about my favorite charrie Toph Bei Fong. Great detail, short, and sweet.

Aw. Thats sweet. Poor toph, can you imagine how scary that would be? I once had a problem with my eyes wich meant i couldnt see for about 2 weeks. There had been an accident, I'd rather not go into it, too scary. But when i woke up i couldnt see. Man, I was terrified! Luckily it was only temporary.

That was good. I Really likedi t. i Might be blind like Toph, but i have Katara's personalit yand elemtn, so therefore, I'm at home in the water. I thirst for its' depths and I'm comforted by its presnece and movements. The story was great! Please write mroe soon!
Lauren

good..but...that's it?

Really pretty drabble, I had the water idea for my ZUko/Toph fanfic, but you got there first.
Still, your imagery rocked!

Great story!

Lovely work! Poor Toph in the water... But Aang saved her ^_^ ! Please write more Tang! Be nice to the plot bunny!

Great story! I love it . keep it up.

That is so sweet! Great job!

Ha...Tophaang is a really good ship to write about.

I love Aang and Toph. They are just too sweet not to be real! Poor Toph would truly be blind in water...and in the air, too. Excellent drabble!