 kaibasgirlx 2008-12-20 . chapter 1Ah, another beautiful oneshot. I really liked the ending, "and suddenly Toph wasn't so blind anymore" and also how in the water she was everything her parents wanted her to be and everything she was not.
Your use of descriptives are amazing.
~Téa |
 BlazingStar999 2008-05-30 . chapter 1Ah...how sweet. :) |
 2007-11-12 . chapter 1 Short and sweet. Just the way I like it. Or you could say it's short and tangy. Taangy, tangy...what's the difference? ...ah...I'll shut up now.
This is a fave.
Keep Writing. |
 Abbigail 2007-11-03 . chapter 1 write more i want to know what happends next. |
 Butterfree 2007-10-24 . chapter 1lol, well it was cute ^^
But I guess it was OOC on Toph's part, but this was written before 'The Chase' aired. So yeah, I'm pretty sure you know why Toph's jsut missing some of her character.
But anyways, besides that, it was awesome!! =D
~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
 Marissa 2007-07-16 . chapter 1 Hey. This was a really great fanfic!! I loved it. Especially since it's about my favorite charrie Toph Bei Fong. Great detail, short, and sweet. |
 Tari 2006-12-22 . chapter 1 Aw. Thats sweet. Poor toph, can you imagine how scary that would be? I once had a problem with my eyes wich meant i couldnt see for about 2 weeks. There had been an accident, I'd rather not go into it, too scary. But when i woke up i couldnt see. Man, I was terrified! Luckily it was only temporary. |
 LittleAngelHorselover 2006-12-12 . chapter 1That was good. I Really likedi t. i Might be blind like Toph, but i have Katara's personalit yand elemtn, so therefore, I'm at home in the water. I thirst for its' depths and I'm comforted by its presnece and movements. The story was great! Please write mroe soon!
Lauren |
 glitz cat 2006-09-18 . chapter 1 good..but...that's it? |
 Hotspur 2006-07-08 . chapter 1Really pretty drabble, I had the water idea for my ZUko/Toph fanfic, but you got there first.
Still, your imagery rocked! |
 almostinsane 2006-05-21 . chapter 1Great story! |
 Aero-Dragon's-Sky 2006-05-14 . chapter 1Lovely work! Poor Toph in the water... But Aang saved her ^_^ ! Please write more Tang! Be nice to the plot bunny! |
 Ash of greenfire 2006-05-13 . chapter 1Great story! I love it . keep it up. |
 daydream11 2006-05-11 . chapter 1That is so sweet! Great job!
Ha...Tophaang is a really good ship to write about. |
 Storybender 2006-05-10 . chapter 1I love Aang and Toph. They are just too sweet not to be real! Poor Toph would truly be blind in water...and in the air, too. Excellent drabble! |