Nice story!
Especially good is the two possible endings! That just adds a much more enjoyment to the story, you can pick which ending you like. Good job!

omg ur story made me cry OMG *sobs* I COULD SO KILL THE ROBBER DUDE RITE NOW!>:O
:'( I WANT TAKERU TO LIVE!

Sweet story, but DON'T EVER GO WITH AN ENDING WHERE TK DIES! AND THEN KARI FOLLOWS HIM?!! BE HAPPY! Anyways, now that that's over, good story and keep writing! LOL.

OMFG! That Was Romantic Yet Sad. I Was Basically Cryin When I Was Read Chapters 9 Through 11. Otherwise, Good Job.

Keep On Writing,
PrincessOfTheDigimon

I have to say that there were more emotions in the first ending but I do prefer happy endings! Both, in fairness, were good but, contrary to what I normally choose, I liked the sad ending better. Either way, great job!

That was a sad ending... but it was great! Well, as great as can be expressed when someone dies but you get the point! Anyway, I really liked this fic though I'm still not sure which ending I'll like better but just so you know - I thought this was a pretty well made ending!

I'm just asking myself why I didn't review the first time I read this fic and I even didn't put it to my favorites, although it definately is some great fic.
I think both endings are ok, but I prefer the alternative one, because Takeru shouldn't be killed by a bastard looking to rob that restaurant... but otherwise it's so cute that he loves her even when he's dead and vice-versa...

great chapter! i love this fic.

HAPPY HAPPY JOY! I hope you get it out soon! I understand what you mean when you say that school has started on your end. It's tough trying to get down two hours of homework and then try and type up a chapter for your story. I mean, it's hard tapping into your creativity and writing during the summer. Now, you may have other things on your mind like a test next week or something like that. I really appreciate your acknowledgement in this author's note. I really look forward to your next story, may it be a Takari, NaruHina or a NejiTen. See you later!

-Omegaguardian

this was reely nice. i reel liked it. keep it up! =)

Aw! So cute! Loved it!^^ & Your welcome!^^

*eye twitch* GOGGLES?! GOGGLES?! WHY?! THAT JUST SPELLS OUT DAIKARI! Ugh... *shudders* Sorry, I got just a little excited, huh? Oh, and yayeth! *grabs notepad* I'm tempted to ask you if you cared if my friend and I put your story on our websiite, and believe me, we're gonna give you full credit for writing the story! Plus, we'll even throw in anymore stories that you want us to put on there! Believe me, they're just that good!

LOL first of all, about the apology... you don't need to be srry. I'm quite new here at and I don't have very many reviews of fics yet and stories, so I'm not to worried about it ^-^. Second, title doesnt scare me as much anymore because of this ending. Third - I like how you brought Davis back again into Tk and Kari's lives. He's kind of always like that -- but this time its his son >.

Wow, this is a really nice ending to a story. I'm impressed. This was really a touching ending which concludes with a laugh (somewhat). Anyway, i really enjoyed your story, as I did "Will Our Love Last?". I just was busy when I read the last story so I couldn't review. I hope you make great stories in the future.

As for your upcoming Naruto story, I'll be looking out for it! I mean, I do have my preferences, but I'm sure I'll like it, as long as it isn't a shonen-ai or shojo-ai story or something. I'm sorry to say, but I pretty much have a rock solid preference when it comes to pairings.

As to my last paragraph, I have to say; don't let my comments steer your decision unless you're looking for suggestions.

I know you'll make great stories in the future (especially good Takari's).

Good luck and have a happy creative journey

-Omegaguardian

heh who would say that Daisuke's son would succeed where he didn't? I mean his son got to date Kari's daughter while he didn't dated Kari lol

guess that's how life is, so misterious ^_^

Anyhow I really enjoyed each chapter of your fic, it was really good, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see your next Takari ^_^