I also love The Highwayman, especially the music it's put to by Loreena Mckennitt. Actually, it was the name that drew me into reading the story. I was impressed with the abstract nature. Some specifics are mentioned, but the rest is up to us to decide.
The one vague thing that I would have made more specific was how long Sarah had spent in the Underground. Not down to the day, or anything, but had she been there for years, months, or less than a week? I think that would have been nice to know and given her deisre to leave a little more substance.
As a writer, I loved the cliffhanger ending, but as a reader it thwarted my desire to read more. So great job all around!

Sevs-heart

absolutely beautiful story, even a little heartbreaking. so true, so plausible... sad indeed. style, impeccable as always. thanks for sharing
M.

Beautiful and bittersweet, this story shows, as you said, that love is not a cure for all problems and is not always enough. I like that it is open-ended, too - so often characters get together and that is the end. Here, the situation is more complicated, but not too angsty. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

I enjoyed this story. I didn't really under stand Sarah's motivation to go home. She seemed fine and then she was leaving him? It was, as always, very well written, although I personally would have preferred them together the end rather than the open-ended ending. Thanks for another well written story.- Clare

ah... this was sweet. I would have liked more closure, but at least they handle it very well. Its not even all that angsty. xD

That was a wonderful story with, what I must admit, was a slightly unexpected-but lovely- ending. I hope to see more work from you in the future and I know I'll enjoy it as much as I did this story!
And I was slightly proud of myself for catching the reference to The Highwayman. =)

It's so... comopletely ambiguous... I like to imagine that she'd eventually choose to go though... XD

Horrible. I hate it.
Very well written, by the way.

Lovely! I just read End of Days again, that's probably the third time in the last couple years I've done so. Afterwards I thought I'd check out what else you'd written...and what a pleasant surprise! Mistletoe was sweet, but I like this more. It's a good concept, and pretty realistic in terms of Sarah needing to live in the real world eventually. I like the open ending. It's one of those things where if you aren't going to flesh it out into a full fic, you might as well leave it to interpretation. ^_^

Keep Writing!

~May

Awh. She didn't stay! She needs to, Jareth needs her to!

This was a beautiful peice, although I felt I was going to cry at the end!

Sarah must come back to Jareth!

Good job with this story!

this is a really good, and very sad story. i'm glad i came upon it. thumbs up!

Absolutely heart-breaking in all the best ways. ;-;

Bravo.

Another lovely story. I liked how raw this one became, and the bittersweet ending suited their relationship perfectly. Wonderful work.

Once again, I love it!! So sad, but so beautiful.
By the way, I don't think it's unpolished at all.

Aw, that's so sad. But it works I think. Well done.