Hmm, there IS a bit of OOC here, but it's still a pretty good ending. I laughed at the part about Sanji running outside and squabbling with Zoro over Nami-swaan.

Thanks for a most fun (and creative) read :) Keep up the good work!

Oh, no... time is running out >_< And Nami has to stay with her father! Ack! There had better be a happy ending :p

Gr, Arlong. Haha. He's definitely more evil than Gaston... but I think he has to be... since he's Arlong :p I kind of wish there was a bit more character development/explanation, but I guess this works for this fic :) As I said in a previous review, it's very fairytale-esque in reading/style :)

Aw, Zoro's jealous :p Haha. It kind of moves a little quickly on that front, but, then again, so did the Disney version. They're running out of time, though!

Yes, finally some interaction between Zoro and Nami :p The kidnapping/fight scene was a BIT confusing, but, other than that, I enjoyed it. :)

Hmm, I like the way you've written this (the whole story, that is). I don't know whether or not it was deliberate, but your crisp, clean writing style (in this fic) really has a very fairytale vibe. It's perfect for this :)

Hmm, interesting. So it looks like Zoro is only the Steward, not the actual lord of the castle? And the bear is very obviously a certain someone :x Hehe.

Haha, very nice. Creative and, again, with the One Piece spin... loved the little line about Nami slipping some money into Wordsworth's pocket :)

Ah! This is a GREAT idea! Haha, it's funny because... the characters really DO fit into these roles... and yet, it's still got a nice One Piece twist. Off to read the next chapter now :)

I almost cried [i don`t cry at all i`m dead inside D:]

This was awesome! Yay for ZoNa!

oh this is the best story on here by far oh jeez im crying i really hate this anyway perfect story

i still love that bowling pin part i laugh everytime

sweet story this will maybe b my 5th time reading it but 1st time reviewing sorry about that its just i was scared i guess cause the 1st time i read this i didn't hav a clue how to work this site but now i do yeah i love this story so much thank you so much for writing it

this is bloody excellent! you've given me an idea too!! :P

it kept me entertained for aggees!