aww, funny! i can totally see that happening.

Ahaha, cute...

Hm...intersting perception of their relationship, although i still hate seimei! lol this was good
Cheers
Crmy

There's something about this fic I really like.
I'm sorry I can't be more constructive and point it out to you, but there just is.
It's a nice little piece.

Heh, poor Soubi.

that's so cute! are you doing to continue? i'm guessing it's a one shot.
heh. that's really adorable. makes the newcomers to Loveless wonder more about seimei's past. good job.

aw! so cute! i almost cried! i loves me sum soubi!

damn you just killed me with that

:)

*swoons*

I love how you portray semei it's... *swoons some more* I'd love to leave a coherent review but i guess.. it's not meant to be

You're a very good writer. This story was well-constructed, and it had a good plot. Way to go!

Hm. I like the way you write, and the idea was cute. Yay you.