 norman 8/13/10 . chapter 6 have chi-chi "acidently" cut vegeta and bulma please do that |
 clow-san 7/30/09 . chapter 6aw man! you have to continue this! perfect! I love the drama, the tension and everything. This is so good. well writeen and another side is showed.
Please to update if the inspiration strikes again! thanks |
 Taeniaea 7/24/09 . chapter 6great story |
 walutahanga 3/30/06 . chapter 6Wow. Cool story. I read this on another website about a year ago, and I've been trying to find it ever since. I guess there's no chance of it being completed, which is a pity because it really is rather good. I like how you've looked at every possible person this could affect - not just Chi-Chi and the man that she did it for, but her children and best friend as well. The idea of the magic knife is pretty nifty, and Trunks mistaking her for Pan was funny.
Anyways, seeya round. |
 super saiyan 4 chichi 7/25/04 . chapter 2why the fu** did goku give up the super saiyan forms just to go back this fic sucks no more SS4 *sniff sniff wah*... |
 super saiyan 4 chichi 7/25/04 . chapter 1ok...this chapter was veery confusing what the hell happened to make chichi a 12 year old and also whatever happed to SUPER SAIYAN 4 goku's an adult there and chichi likes him in that form so why couldn't he just stay like that as long as he could i hate it when ppl do stuff like this and i really hate goku as a little kid i only like him as an adult SS1,2,3, and most definately out of all is SS4. SS4 is just the coolest thing ever and goku is so AWSOME like that...anywayz im just babbling on... |
 Nisha 11/26/02 . chapter 6I don't get the end...but keep going. |
 Nisha 11/26/02 . chapter 4Sad chap. *sob* |
 Nisha 11/26/02 . chapter 3I needa friend like that gee. |
 Nisha 11/26/02 . chapter 2Cute, cute |
 Nisha 11/26/02 . chapter 1Dooby Doo. I'm reading this again and I noticed I forgot to review the first time. Sorry! HAHA |
 Polka Dot 11/18/02 . chapter 6 Hmm I wonder what day Goku is referring to. Now I feel sorry for everyone, but Goku. |
 mahtar 11/17/02 . chapter 6Wow...I don't know what else to say. I really like this, it's very original and...urgh! You know, it's very frustrating being so inarticulate. That was kind of a contradiction huh? Well, this is well written and really good. Very interesting in how it's progressing. Hope you update soon! |
 Lady Nightshade 11/17/02 . chapter 6Cool chapter but what did Goku mean when he said "It was raining that day, remember?" |
 lil debbie 11/17/02 . chapter 6thank you thank you thank you! you updated!
and it was FUCKING AWESOME! |