But at least WE know how he is...

aww i luv this story but im so sad that joe had to die now is just the hardy boy!

Oh, that's sad...but no clearer so update soon...

OMG! Poor Joe! Poor Frank! Poor Nancy! Great chapter though u give good details though when ur not being purposley vague for evil cliff hangers.

Its a little confusing. keep up the good work

(The pace jumps

BACK

and FORTH)

like that :)

other then that - good.

I don't like stuff where Joe's dead because then Joe's not there (but he could make his appearances through flashbacks?) but something about the sumary struck me oddly so I guess I'll keep reading. But since it was a very short first chapter I don't know what to think yet. I kinda thought the ch ended at a weird place and what does this 0300 and 1932 hours mean? Anyway, update soon...

hmm...I wonder who died is it joe? great chapter kinda short though, i really really hate cliffhangers but it makes the story more interesting.

It's pretty good. I'd reckoned longer chapters. (Ignore my spelling)