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Riana1
2007-08-15
ch 3,
abuse/On the other hand, the day Jonathan Alistair Stewart was talked down to by a namby pamby bleeding heart leprechaun liberal was the day the dark lord Hades started up a snowplough before setting out to work./

You have a way with words.
Riana1
2007-08-15
ch 2,
abuse*falls over dead from laughing*
Riana1
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseI love this.
nannon
2007-03-03
ch 3, anon.
abusewow. this is the funniest thing i've read in awhile. i laughed so much i almost cried. i really hope you continue.
KaL-El of Krypt0n
2006-07-10
ch 3,
abusewow. I just... wow. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
LarSinger
2006-07-07
ch 3,
abuseThis is very witty. I love the similies you use and your tongue-in-cheek attitude. I'm very curious to see what happens next now that half the JL is going bonkers!

Great job!
KaL-El of Krypt0n
2006-05-19
ch 2,
abusei am...SO confused...yet so AMUSED beyond belief. ^_^
HitokiriKurisuta
2006-05-18
ch 2,
abuseI love how this is getting to be a serious story, and yet still managing to be hilarious throughout the entirety of it. -^.^-

Still don't know what exactly's up with J'onn, but I suppose we'll be finding out soon enough.
...Hmm...Perhaps when we find out who has been messing with Sir Justin's steed a few answers shall be found?

I guess I'll just have to wait for your next update, then. Keep up the good work, and please update once you have time to spare! ^__^
Captain-Emily
2006-05-18
ch 2,
abuseI don't quite know where you're going with this, but I'm dying to find out nonetheless. It's hilarious. (The image of Shining Knight fearlessly brandishing his trusty barbecue spatula still makes me giggle.) Your Clark is adorably clueless. Although it may not be canon, I love it when big blue's written like that.

I'm looking forward to your next update. (Hopefully with more Batclan appearances. =op )
Glod
2006-05-18
ch 2,
abuseFor such a good chapter, it didn't tell me anything at all about what's happening!! I am so desperate to find out what's going to happen that you're lucky i can't trace you via internet identity and hold a gun to your head till you write some more...

PLEASE PLEASE update soon! This is so good!!
Glod
2006-05-12
ch 1,
abuseThis is great!! I needed something to cheer me up at the end of a crap day, and i could not have possibly picked anything better! You got the characters down pat, and i nearly died laughing! I love your similes, and the dialogue is just priceless! The way you started it was comic genius (well, close enough!)

I can't believe there's only one chapter... can't wait for the next!
Proponent of EVO
2006-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI love this.

The shifting style is great, and you have some honest to goodness bickering between the characters most people are least inclined to make bicker.

Great job!
HitokiriKurisuta
2006-05-11
ch 1,
abuse^laughs so hard I fall out of my seat, hit my head on the desk during the way down, and continue laughing, even as my head throbs^
Nice! ^_^ Update once you have time, please!
doc-trigger
2006-05-09
ch 1,
abuseI'm confused. Very, very confused...Please update soon so i wont get a headache! =]

BYE!
Trickster91
2006-05-09
ch 1,
abuseyeah, yeah sure. blame everything on the Vigilante.It's kinda funny though.I didn't know cowboys like oreos. Poor J'onn.Who ever started this J'onn liking oreos thing, is a big hit.Keep up the good work!!
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