Very grim, but I like. It was simple and to the point, showing us examples of Draco rather than grabbing at every one of his thoughts. It made the story all the more mysterious. It's also very realistic, and adds more to the Snape mystery. Poor Draco-one must wonder what Snape did with him. The Pansy bit at the end surprised me, but it was a nice touch, I think. A little out of the blue, but then again not, and it gives it the necessary sort-of-happy ending. Good job.

wow that's really good. even if it's characters readers hate, i think you did a good job bringing out their human sides.

Poor Draco, he's really crushed in this story.