 Funny-Luv200 2009-08-21 . chapter 1Aw, this was so cute! :) |
 MN 2008-08-12 . chapter 1 That was absolutely brillant. I couldn't have done it better myself. I loved the song and the flashbacks. If there were mistakes, they were minor and not noticeable. The story/song flowed beatifully. Actually the beat the flowed through my head for some reason was Perfect. Weird but both gives me the feeling of nostalgia. It's weird because the time I want to go back to only ever existed in my mind. It warmed my heart at the same time it broke it because there are the things we actually see everyday. We condemn without knowing the facts. It's sade but it's life. I really love this song. This is somethign I'd have on my ipod. Really great. Thanks for writing it. |
 animeboysrock23 2006-08-10 . chapter 1 great story and love the song |
 Sqidly 2006-08-03 . chapter 1Thay story deserves one word- Awesome! And the song was perfect for it. You did agreat job! |
 Gem 2006-07-27 . chapter 1 I just found this oneshot. You made me cry! I love it though because I feel like I can relate to it. Keep going with stuff like this! |
 Dances_on_the_wind 2006-07-16 . chapter 1 Hey love the one-shot! I'm a big fan of the song... |
 Inuharmony 2006-06-22 . chapter 1I love this oneshot, it's sad yet happy. The song was cool. |